This is a good fic. If there is a sequel I shall hasten to read it, and if not, I implore you to write one.

That's amazing. Really gives you an inside look on this character. Is there going to be more or is this just a stand-alone story?

Oh! Oh! - PLEASE, CONTINUE? :D *Puppy eyes you, then huggles the Dark Magician* -

Dark Magician: *Just stands there for a bit* For my sake. . . ' please continue the story. She doesn't care of it's statis (couple groups, if any), she likes it. *Returns the hug*

*Snuggles against Mahado's chest (mid-way)*

Dark Magician: *Simply sighs*

I loved it! Wonderful manipulation of DM's loyalty to Atemu. Interesting writing style and plot! Yay to you!

Awesome. My only qualms are the misspelling of "armor" and "murmur".

This is a wonderful fic! You should write more fics that star Yami and the Dark Magician. I liked how you could almost be _inside_ his mind, and it was nice.

Great story! Loved the deep details of Dark Magician ().

A touching read. I especially liked the way you described the Dark Magician's state of mind before, during and after he was summoned and his experience of those things. I also liked how the story was something of a subterfuge, something that could have been going on in an episode without anyone noticing it at first sight, because only the viewpoints of the duelists are shown. -

So beautiful! ::sniffles:: You wrote this incredibly well. It's amazing...
It moved me. ::grins sheepishly:: Best thing I could come up with to say, anyway.
Great fic!

That was beautiful. From the fractured structure at the beginning, to the ray of hope at the end, just beautiful.

FINALLY! A Mahada/Dark Magician X Yami! THANK YOU SO MUCH! *Glomps* I'm faving this ((If its a one shot thats good, because i take storys off my fav list once their completed))... we! *dances* Thank you so much! Im working on a few myself right now...

::sigh:: In all truth, I wasn't all that fond of Yami Yugi or Dark Magician fics until I read this fic. Your writing's very strong; it's always a pleasure to read.

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This is a good story, falsechaos. You made this story a lot different, going with the Dark Magician's POV. The thoughts that the Dark Magician had were very good. You made me feel like he was right there, watching over me.