i liked chap2 better. kureiXkurenai! haha. butchered? nah... it's ok. sometimes it's ok to be OOC, ne? x

I think that was great! There is such a lack of Kurei/Kurenai stories at all, that this was a gem to find! Thank you for writing such a nice and touching story of my favorite Flame of Recca couple! _

Well, that was nice, no butchering of Kurei's character, or at least as much as I could tell. I liked it, although it's seems just to be a recount of what happened in the story... no new insights or anything, but still I liked it. To/fus as amazing as they are get a little dull after a while...

So keep writing!

Chap.1 was sweet. really sweet. the type to inspire "aaw..." and sighs from the readers (me in particular _) as for oocness, who's to know if they're really ooc? the series never put them in THAT kind of situation before _ so, there! who knows if they'll act like that or not right? _ we certainly have no right to judge being mere fans and all..then again some stories are really and i mean REALLY ooc. but don't worry, yours isn't one of them. (for me that is)

Chap. 2 it's very nice. it's that simple. _ will be waiting for more!

Have a little faith in yourself? This chapter is great... And i think KureixKurenai fits that song to a T too! Kampatte!

Mhmm, I'm glad to know good stories still exist on . This was (undoubtedly short) a good treat to read! Tokiya/Fuuko are always the best ones of course (on FoR) but, I hope to see more of this couple soon under your name! It was a very cute scene, and it wasn't that much out of character! (A little bit at the end, but that's okay.. Fluff makes up for everything)

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Hey, this is really good and I like the simple style of your writing - nice, good flow - and as for OOC-ness...don't worry, it's nothing to drastic or horrendous, in fact it's acceptable and very heartwarming. Anyway, don't worry too much about OOC or not, cos I think you're on the right track, sometimes OOC-ness can't be help. At least you don't have Fuuko-chan swooning or Mi-chan going all gushy - *wink*

Yup, looking forward to the next bit, ToFuu or not.

If ya dun update, I won't review (i review for everychappie of every story I like) and I Will personally kill you (jk)

Aw... That's so sweet! I love it.

Why do I get the feeling that the tofuu fics just keep getting better and better? _ Well, here's what: you take it to a whole new level. I dig your writing style, it's casual, cool, and very, very... ticklish. Inspires goosebumps to be exact. Two thumbs up, keep it going.

! I found nother vignette! you must've done it yesterday and didn't tell me, naughty naughty!

Oh well! Hey i loved it! you actually got it off Bekky? it was just wondieful! Yea, and as your previous reviewer said, no ooc up front. i liked the bit where he caught her goggling at him.

"You were staring."

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BWAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHA! was her mouth hanging open? drooling? Haha, i suppose not, i mean, he would tell her if she was _

O... so our naughty lil Tokiya has never said the 3 magical words b4 eh? hahaha, it's SO like him. And so like Fuuko to be too lazy to press him (my assumption) after all *winkz* what matters is that...

"she knew he loved her. And she loved him, too."

Neh?

This was both short and sweet, wonderful to see more FoR works popping up! and did I get myself wrong? For i think i see an SK one as well, hm... double naughty for not telling me. _

Well, dat's all mousey! I'll cya when u get home!

Mouse-chan, this is just so sweet! I absolutely adored it! Well, I can tell you that in the front part where they were teasing each other (erm... correction, where Fuuko was teasing Tokiya), both were SO cute and aren't ooc at all. Well, maybe a wee little at the end but I didn't think it affected the feeling and flow of the story at all. This chapter was a success, I'd be waiting for you write about the others. But I'll still like Tofuu best! _ Kambate!

hello again da*mouse! i think your story is very good! who cares if mi-chan and fuuko is OOC, i think they are VERY sweet together! *winkz*

i love the whitney houston song, and the first line just fits this scene nicely. hmm, the next line should be "sometimes it's wrong, sometimes it's right" and i am looking forward to read how you write in reference to that. ;)

cheers, write more!