Reviews for Forbidden
ylsen chapter 9 . 6/12/2019
No puede ser. Esta historia no esta terminada. Tiene tanto potencial y no tiene final. Por favor, si pudieras... Terminar esta historia. Es muy buena. Quiero saber el final, quiero saber como terminan juntos y todo el cariño que se expresarán. Saludos
lucasgirl101 chapter 9 . 12/10/2016
...I am aware that this story has not been updated in 12 years.
However, this is perhaps the most engrossing BB/Rae story I have yet to come across. For the little eleven-year-old inside me who wishes that they had truly gotten together in the show because DANG IT Raven deserves to be happy, I wish that you would truly finish this story, miss.
I am aware that you've probably forgotten all about this story. That you've moved on with your life and have possibly forgotten your fascination with perhaps one of the greatest animated TV series of all time.
But I have not. Here in 2016, browsing the internet for stories about my favorite couples, I have not. And though it is incredibly selfish of me, I wish you would finish this. Yours is the first story I have ever reviewed on this site, Miss SuNsHiNe10, because I believe it deserves it. I wonder if this will even reach you, as I have no other way of contacting you, I believe.
farhan99 chapter 9 . 6/6/2016
Okay so since this clearly isn't going to be updated since its been over a decade. As a new reader I found this story interesting and to any new readers I guess the best thing to do would be to imagine Raven broke up with Carden after chapter 6 (he's not really mentioned much afterwards anyway) and imagine that the story completes itself after chapter 9 (although I do wish at least someone completed this story). For the original author: I hope you come back and write some more. I'm not usually a fan of angsty stories but this was actually a decent one with humor mixed in. I definitely liked it!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/30/2016
Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg
Please finish it! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
13DiamondPython13 chapter 9 . 3/27/2014
Is this completed? I would still like more though.
13DiamondPython13 chapter 3 . 3/27/2014
This is an intervention. No more sugar for you. Nope. Zilch. Nada.
OmegaTheLegend chapter 9 . 12/18/2013
this is awesome you should tooootallly finish it
snowwhite19 chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
hey i love this chapter i was not happy when i started reading this but now i am thank you for writing.
Yeya the BlackPhoenix chapter 9 . 7/25/2011
Ever plan on finishing this story? D: It's really good.
UpdaterMage chapter 9 . 4/3/2008
4 Years? in a low, menacing tone: 4 YEARS? Update or be destroyed by the flaming swords of angelic wrath. I love the story and I want more, so UPDATE. NOW.
xChemicalxFallxPanicx chapter 9 . 10/10/2007
Well..I really love your fic. I mean you really capture the characters. I was just wondering..if maybe..youd update...soon...please? T.T I was so sad when i got to this chapter and FINALLY noticed the date of the last update. I can't wait (but will) to find out what happens next.
Lola chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Cool but cut the cussing down a little it kinda ruins the story but so far it's pretty good! :)
200 chapter 9 . 4/2/2007
OMG YOU NEED TO UPDATE! IT HAS BEEN TREE YEARS! THREE ! #$EN YEARS AND YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED MORE! YOUR STORY IS AWESOME BUT YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS!
Samantha chapter 9 . 11/15/2006
Excellent! When is the next chapter?
SuperBunnie chapter 9 . 11/12/2006
any chance you'd update soon please? this is super spiffy, and i'd like to get the ending
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