Not sure if youre still on FF, but, I finally read your fic and first off, I love this ship and I love the idea and I want you to continue to write no matter what I said because you know what? no one is a perfect writer.

That being said, I have some things to point out:

First off, I think is a bit odd how Kitty and Tabby just invite themselves to be with Kurt in Germany, Im Kurtty all and all, but, that seems rude, imagine if Kitty wanted to spend time with her family in Chicago and everyone invite themselves to be in her house?

Why Professor X goes along with this?

Not going to comment on Tabby and Kurt, because, thats not my cup of tea.

The kissing part, where Kitty gives him a peck on his lips, I know it was supposed to be innocent, but, at that time she was under the impression he was still dating Amanda and that is not cool. And I dont even like Amanda.

Franka makes me think of Comic! Amanda and I dont want to see her ever again.

While Kurt is in love with Kitty, they went together too quickly and how come Kitty didnt think she is a rebound?

I love evil ex that wants to take down the competition, but, she could have been subtle, in fact, if Kurt has a girl who already likes him...his relationship with Amanda makes less sense(yes, he does not need to like every girl that likes him, but still, the relationship gets even weaker)

I like how Amanda confirms that she was dating Kurt because he is a new thing, but, then got bored and back down. It seems something realistic and canon for the show.

Why Kitty never feel bad for basically following a boy to his homeland? I thought she would at least think over and feel silly for her actions, maybe, try to learn more about Germany and meet more people. I dont know, she tagging along is not cool.

You could have made the Professor taking the students to Germany. This way Kitty could be there with Kurt without being cringe and Kurt could spend time with his family.

Kurt could be teaching Tabby and Kitty how to speak German and as they spend time together their feelings are getting more developed. No, I never thought for a minute, Tabby liked him for real, so, I can see her only teasing Kitty but never showing any real interest on Kurt.

In fact, Tabby could help them be together, it could be successful or shenanigans issues.

Cool fic. Hey, keep writing and keep improving.

Amazing

This fic was amazing. Though I'll admit that I really feel like theres and epilogue overdue. ;D

Wonderful story :) Looking forward to reading the rest!

Wait 3 girls, whose the 3rd?

Plots are over rated but this is an awesome story

Please write more awesomeness about X-Men Evolution

Please write back as soon as you get this

Do you hate tabby?

That's right Tabitha. You are a banana.

:D YAY! Happy endings, you've gotta love 'em!

I, a grown man, clapped and giggled as I read this... well done.

Love,
Paragon

i have been looking for this story for sooo long! is great gut

*laughs* Looks like it's going to be an interesting summer for Kurt. That part where Tabby realizes that she can't speak German was hilarious. XD

Awesome story. PERFECT EVERYTHING.I might break the favorite button.

Lol so funny when I read the wagon was on fire I was like shit shit shit shit shit and then next chapter tabby was like shit omg made my life/day lol super good story I am in love