I think you did a great job on this prologue and it's a great set up to the story!

I like the second part this story too.

phhht! All Harry does is stutter, whine and cry! He is so much stronger than that in cannon, never really breaks down. Once or twice... fine, but every chapter? Other than that, good story and Jinx is a riot.

I was humming whispers in the dark by skillet this entire chapter because of that name! Great name!

Why would lily put LP in the book when her name was Evans while she was at school?

I'm awaiting some kind of happiness from Harry soon! He is perpetually sad, anxious and stressed out! When, oh when, will he lighten up?
Also, those dreams he's having: Sirius and Regulus? Draco and Lucius? Sounds like them, at any rate...

These are brilliant. I've read Bring Me To Life and Echoes of the Mind in two days. And I'm starting Somewhere I Belong. I'm loving the song titles too. Two of my absolute favourite songs. 3

Another great story! Getting readyvto start the next book. Please keep writing!

These are all of the healing spells I know of that were used in Canon.

1. Anapneo (clears the throat of a choking victim)
2. Brachium Emendo (heals brachial bones)
3. Episkey (treats mild to moderate injuries ranging from split lips to broken noses)
4. Ferula (binds and splints fractures)
5. Reparifors (heals minor magically-induced ailments like paralysis)
6. Ossio Dispersimus (removes bones)
7. Tergeo (clears up dried blood from a bleeding wound)
8. Vulnera Sanentur (heals deep gashes like those caused by the Sectumsempra curse)

Once again, I would just like to express my love for you and your treatment of Remus. You are making me a very happy reader by fostering this father/son relationship between Remus and Harry. And I feel Remus is quite realistically portrayed. So thank you for that. 3 3 3

I just wanted to let you know how much I absolutely LOVE how much of a role Remus is having in Harry's life in this story! He always seems to end up a background character, sort of there but not really, and he is my absolutely favorite character in the entire series. I really think you're doing him justice and it makes me smile that he's developing such a strong relationship with Harry like I always hoped he would in the series. 3 _

Oh man, the twists in this story are Amazing! I can't wait to read

The next one! Great job! Totally love it!

Loved it.

:)

I know I'm really late...but I am in serious love with this series! I haven't been able to stop reading it!