you should update this its awsome

I love the plot line! Please update soon!

Heh. I've seen dissapearing-Yue and complaining-Yue, but I've never seen let's-make-Yukito-marry-an-evil-woman-Yue! Oh, the angst never stops.
Please continue, because it is funny and I likes it. (Yes we do, precious, we likes the fanfic, we does.)

Interesting. I like your concept and where you're taking it. I'll definitely be watching for updates.
On a more critical note, I think you have to watch your punctuation and capitalization more carefully. You had periods in where commas should be and it broke up the continuity of your sentences.
Secondly, when you switch to another speaker in your dialog, you have to start a new paragragh, otherwise it confuses the audience. For some reason in fanfic writing this gets forgotten.
Again, you have my attention and I think your fic has a lot of promise. *Thumbs up*

Yay! Update!

Don't feel bad if you don't get many reviews, it's not the story, it's the fandom...*bitter writer's face* TouyaxYuki stories don't get nearly enough attention. This story is great tho. Please continue it PWEASE

Wa~i. I'm so glad this updated; you've done a wonderful job so far and I've eagerly awaited to see what you could come up with. _

Please continue,

Keep up the /great/ work!

~Naomi-chan

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NO! but yes! this is good, but no, how could you do that? seriously how could you do that to yuki and touya? how oh poor them!

I DO NOT LIKE KIRA!

what did you mean by "Yukito blinked. Since when did he like men? Kira would be pleased to here that one." I thought for a second that she was his friend with this line that might think he is gay, but does she want him to have a three-some or something?

This is too good, continue soon! please, e-mail me when you do, with a link would be great, but with a title and pen name would be good too.

Thanks if yo do.

This is TOO good! now hurry and update.

Oh My God you have to continue this! There arent many GOOD T/Y stories out there and this seems to have lots of potential! please?

Anyway, I suggest a "Lets kill Kira" club. Who'd join me?

I hope you don't mind, since she's ur character and all...heh heh...

Onegai! Continue!

This is really good. Please continue!

Ohh... I like where this is going...

Please tell me that this is gonna be T/Y/Y? Pretty please with sugar on top?

So far this is pretty good. I don't see a lot of irritating things... like typos and comma splices... or the over use of the... thing I like to do.

All in all, this is a very good fic. Please update soon!

Ja

Xan Yu

Wow, this is really complicated! But intriguing! Please write more soon!