interesting Story and pairing an kid too
i think Mitsukai is so out of control as she did not got the Training as a youkai does Need since birth... but she will learn the hard way...and did already start too.
and kagome...she Needs so much someone to talk too like with kouga...not having sex with sesshomaru as this does not help with her..there...Problems...sure a Little it does help but not Long...
she needs a youkai she can trust...like myoga or the blacksmith...i woul say shippou but im unsure if he was in the way of the attack by inu or still away at kaedes town...
but she needs to clear things, the attack of inu that nearly killed her, that she did not really loved him but had a teen crush on him...i mean he looked not bad was a badass with a sometimes nice spot and puppy ears...and did fight and defended her...all what makes a Young Girl in this years go crazy... but no real love
and the pregnancy and all the hurt at this time the Holding back of her own power...the loosing of paart of her power agter the birth...the loooong birth that must have been so painful without a doc and good after care... the Baby and later teaching... she should have seen then a psych..doc too

hope they all get the help needed fast, bevor she trys something stupi like taking her life...

it is still hope for new chaps and an end to this Story...last update was 2004...now its 2017

i think kagome did some more or less big mistakes...she should have brought her daughter home after she found her...she should have told her about her father andd what she is...the Girl should not think that she is a Monster or such but know why it is nether to avoid humans...
and soundproofing her room would be also a good idea with all her nightmares...

but sesshomaru...is unresonable...how could she contact him that he has a Baby with her...he should have known that she was fertile when they got together and that there could be a Baby from there union at this day...he could have looked after her now and then...guys...really...

Why is this DISCONTINUED? It is a good story. I would like to know if Kagome does what I think she is going to do.

OMG I just reread this in one sitting, 'cause I'd forgotton how awesome it is and I just couldn't stop once I started again lol

I am a huge fan of this story and hope that one day you'll by chance find the muse to help you finish it :D However, considering the incredibly lengthy hiatus, I'm not gonna hold my breath lol as a sometimes fellow author I know how stressful it can be when readers pester for updates.

I think you're a really talented author, and I hope one day you'll continue to write more SessKag, but if real life is busy and full and fun, that of course takes precedence :)

I can't remember exactly if this is true, but I believe that you had another story on here that you took down for some reason? I seem to remember it being another SessKag (or perhaps NarKag? It's been so long I really don't remember :/) that I absolutely LOVED to bits.

I won't ask you to repost it because obviously you took it down for a reason, but I was wondering if you could please send me a copy of it so I can reread it again too? (My e-mail is either: OR ) I swear I'm not gonna plagiarize; as a fellow sometimes author I have a great dislike of plagiarizers, and my morals in general are offended when people do that kind of thing because it's essentially stealing from someone else, and in my opinion the stealing of ideas and hard work is much worse than stealing something tangible.

Anyhoo, I'm still and will always be a Fan of Yours, and hope you have a good day! ;)

Loove it

please tell me there is more! i need to read more! ok so this is what i would like you to do, please contact me with any information about this story or any others.

'k?

~kaori takata

I really wish you would continue with this story someday. I will keep it under my alert section just in case.

I know that you discontinued this. But I absolutely loved it. Of course, I would have loved to have a closed ending, but the more I thought about it, an open ending just made the piece that much angsty.

Beautiful story, absolutely breathtaking. Amazing. I love the descrptiveness of your characters and how you let them play off of one another. They do not seem to be mere mindless things of human play, but creatures with minds of their own.

How could you write such and emotional heart wretching story and just discontiune it.

Come one you got to at least finish it.

Incredible-I really can't find the words to descrbe this work...

...which is interesting considering my skill with words.

To think this only caught my eye because you have the same first name as me. I suppose one can never judge the value of a thing by the way in which it is discovered.

You truly seem to understand what it means to be youkai.

I would suggest you take the time to have it proofread and edited-I see you have discontinued this story, but what you have could stand on it's own as a published work.

wow... is tat da end?

I never reviewed your story but I read it and reread. So that proves that I enjoyed it very MUCH! So please as a faithful reader please for my Sanity Finsh your story. You are a great writer !

What a pity that you've given up on this story. Although, I guess this could also be seen as an ending. Kagome giving up and succumbing to death, while Mitsukai gets a father and Sesshoumaru is no longer alone... sorta. Kagome is kinda a selfish jerk in this story, but I'm trying to see it from her perspective that if my love suddenly turned on me and began to kill our friends, then EAT them, I think that i would be pretty traumatized in the end as well. Although, it was her own damned fault for having sex with Sesshoumaru in the first place, the nitwit. I found it interesting that Sesshoumaru brought Kagome back to life, presumably after she killed herself. Strange. Very sad story. Wonderfully written with minimal mistakes, and a convincing OC that unto herself practically owned the story. You did a great job of keeping most of the characters in character, with the exception of crazy Kagome.

...I'm not sure if I like all of this Kagome crying thing. I'm getting fed up with it, and I'm surprised that Sessh. isn't either. It's fantastically written-you have created several original characters that seem to breathe life more than the characters you borrowed to create the story itself. I'm just tired of Kagome or Mitsukai crying constantly.