please update soon. I'd like to read more of this story

Darien is an arse

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PICK THIS BACK UP...PLZ PLZ PLZ

Hurry up and write more please! :-P :-) :-D to good for a wait!

no!
you JUST CANT QUIT THISSTORY IS TOO GOOD

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee upload the nextttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt pweaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

finish the story pleaseee...

plz plz plz update soon this is soooooooooooo good i'm in desperate need for an update.

it was much easier to understand this chapter. at first i though you didn't know much about english grammar. i'm glad i'm wrong. this story is getting really interesting. i bet andrew either likes mina, lita, or rita.

i do like it, but some of the phrasing you used didn't make sense. like:

You better watch your mouth girl, or you may end just say you don't want to know how you'll end up.

(the you may end part is confusing, i would've said "you don't even want to know where you'll end up.

and

'Could it be? Darien might actually like .anyone's better than Beryl!' Jadeite thought.

(shouldn't it be: 'Could it be? Darien might actually like someone better than Beryl!'

everyone makes mistakes, but plz try to be more careful about your wording.

i l0ve it darien p0ssessive,,,/

Absolutely love this story so far...I hope you'll continue it!

No! it just stops, please update soon. Your story is really good and interesting. I just recently chanced upon your story, and I've really liked it up till now, but you haven't updated in so long. Did you need help on anything? Hope to hear from you soon!

i hope you continue this story. Now that Darien has told serena that he loves her i wonder what is gonna happen next. What is diamond gonna do to get serena.

finish