Reviews for Rival |
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SomeNobody chapter 1 . 12/4/2017 Hmmmm |
MandyQ Writes chapter 1 . 12/25/2016 Hey, this is years late, and I have no idea if you will ever read this, but I wanted to drop a review. I really enjoyed how you portrayed Gary, and somehow managed to get into his head; this rivalry that was born from a friendship that CHANGED. He was certainly an arrogant arse in the pokéani, but you captured how he became that way - no one is born that mean - and how he eventually rose above it. Professor Oak would definitely have understood and seen what Gary could not at first; maybe he went through that many years ago as Sammy himself... |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 nice |
HaPPy2901 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015 That was satisfying! It makes perfect sense on why they're rival in the first place |
Kyu-Momo chapter 1 . 5/28/2013 That was very touching. I liked it! :) |
Mello-Drama-Reborn chapter 1 . 2/17/2013 Wow this is very beautiful, and I love how it takes specific moments from such a long range in their timeline. Thank you for putting the effort you did into this and giving me a great read! |
qfaceq chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 This is FANTASTIC! :) |
pokemaster101 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012 BEAUTIFUL! 333333333333333 Best story for Ash and Gary friendship I've ever read! I agree with a reviewer: you should DEFINITELY make a sequel to this! Keep it up! 8DDDDD |
A Midsummer chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 -in tears- Ahh, damnit. Now it made sense. |
Le Masque Noir chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 Fabulous, just fabulous. I enjoyed reading it. Great work :) |
Nekokonneko chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 This is to date the best fic I've read that deals with Ash and Gary's canon relationship. |
professorkumquat chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 ...This made me cry, it was beautiful. I loved it...It was absolutely amazing...I would say 'make an epilouge' but it's perfect on it's own. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012 gives me headcannon aflasdjflsdkfjvc vxlckjvcx why is this ship so perfect why |
Ms Briar chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 Aww super cute! |
Lyra the Heretic chapter 1 . 8/17/2010 Oh my gosh, this explains SO MUCH. Also it's kinda touching. I'm holding back tears here. Yay. |