Reviews for Rival
SomeNobody chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
Hmmmm
MandyQ Writes chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Hey, this is years late, and I have no idea if you will ever read this, but I wanted to drop a review.

I really enjoyed how you portrayed Gary, and somehow managed to get into his head; this rivalry that was born from a friendship that CHANGED. He was certainly an arrogant arse in the pokéani, but you captured how he became that way - no one is born that mean - and how he eventually rose above it.

Professor Oak would definitely have understood and seen what Gary could not at first; maybe he went through that many years ago as Sammy himself...
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016
nice
HaPPy2901 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
That was satisfying! It makes perfect sense on why they're rival in the first place
Kyu-Momo chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
That was very touching.

I liked it! :)
Mello-Drama-Reborn chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Wow this is very beautiful, and I love how it takes specific moments from such a long range in their timeline. Thank you for putting the effort you did into this and giving me a great read!
qfaceq chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
This is FANTASTIC! :)
pokemaster101 chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
BEAUTIFUL! 333333333333333

Best story for Ash and Gary friendship I've ever read! I agree with a reviewer: you should DEFINITELY make a sequel to this!

Keep it up! 8DDDDD
A Midsummer chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
-in tears- Ahh, damnit. Now it made sense.
Le Masque Noir chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Fabulous, just fabulous. I enjoyed reading it.
Great work :)
Nekokonneko chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This is to date the best fic I've read that deals with Ash and Gary's canon relationship.
professorkumquat chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
...This made me cry, it was beautiful. I loved it...It was absolutely amazing...I would say 'make an epilouge' but it's perfect on it's own.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
gives me headcannon

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why is this ship so perfect why
Ms Briar chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Aww super cute!
Lyra the Heretic chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Oh my gosh, this explains SO MUCH.

Also it's kinda touching. I'm holding back tears here.

Yay.
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