Reviews for Moon and Star |
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Roxy chapter 13 . 11/22/2012 can u please please please update the full version of chpt 13 on to the actual story i cant get to the link and its a M rated fic its supposed to have slash |
Newt Marauder chapter 1 . 8/25/2012 I'm intrigued by this story, and I want to continue it. Your grammatical errors are really annoying me, so I hope it gets better. |
ljusalfheim chapter 13 . 9/29/2011 Your fic is M-rated, so why didn't you publish the lemon here? I couldn't open your site D: and I'm sad for that :( |
RemmyBlack chapter 23 . 5/22/2009 This is really good, D |
AlchemicNinja26844 chapter 13 . 5/5/2009 I couldn't get to the site! I wanna know what happend and why Remus is naked! ... |
the voice of singing clouds chapter 23 . 8/20/2008 aw what a nice story |
NoDayBut2Day525600 chapter 8 . 9/19/2006 more detailed kissing descriptions please! |
The Miss Marauders chapter 8 . 6/14/2006 Um, yay! Romantic...not... x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 7 . 6/14/2006 Stupid stag! x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 6 . 6/14/2006 *blinkblink* x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 5 . 6/14/2006 Euch. Grr. x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 4 . 6/14/2006 I have a sneaking suspicion of where this is going. It involves Snape, Sirius's realisation of Snape liking Remus, and the Whomping Willow... I do so hope that isn't true. x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 3 . 6/14/2006 Ugh! Sirius you idiot! You don't say that whilst looking at the person you're crushing on! People will notice, stupid! x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 2 . 6/12/2006 *blinkblink* Snape has a crush on Remus? I hope you won't use that at all... x C x |
The Miss Marauders chapter 1 . 6/12/2006 It's a good idea and plotline but everyone speaking on the same line and all the punctuation errors bug me. x C x |