Heh heh heh they're afraid of her for good reason, good chapter.

*reads A/N* Are you ever going to stop trying to harm readers or do I have call for an orbital bombardment on you?

I love his story but you gotta stop having DL conversation in the middle of a paragraph. think of it this way would you wanna read say Harry Potter with the author commentary every other paragraph? don't over compensate you have a wonderful story

I am interested in the story because the flow of the story is done so well and I think you are an amazing author, but the AN are so jarring for me. The way you randomly switch into italics for a paragraph is kind of confusing and Kagome is such a jerk pulling me out of the immersion. I'd love to keep reading, however this just isn't the story for me. Good luck though.

beautiful

good. Very nice. I like it

Plz Don't kill me

this is tense, and amazing, i love it!

Oh, so this is an awesome story idea, and you've even got a decent execution, (though your development is a little fast) but I CAN'T keep reading. The author's notes in the middle of the chapter are WAY to distracting. Whenever I start to get into the story there's an AN is there to shove me right back out. They kill your sentence flow and are well know for being one of the biggest pet peeves of readers everywhere. I would like to give this story another shot, but they'd have to go. They don't add anything and they take away a ton.

loved this fic a from me for a job well done. now off to your page to see what other stories you have wrote that I can read :-)

Kagome is being childish. She shouldn't have to ignore Inuyasha because of a mistake that she didn't tell him she was going into heat. She should have warned him, but because she didn't, she was his victim when he lost control of his instincts. It is her fault that this happened to her. If she had warned him, it wouldn't have happened you see. Kagome is just being a brat. I hope they stop the silly games of her ignoring him because of what happened. Jeez... she was stupid to have not warned him.

i don't like it at allllllllllllllllllllll!

i don't like it when people fall in love oh i forgot that i a was a girl

weirdooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

So I know this fic is old and I am really trying to sort through all the nonsense and enjoy the story but Kagome's character is flighty and an overall bitch (not in a good way). So I'm gonna stop. You seem to really enjoy writing or atleast you did at this moment in time. Goodluck with future fanfics and anything beyond

I loved this story! It took me only one day to complete reading. One of the parts I liked the most was at the reunion and how Souta ends up getting a lot of gifts from everyone in Kagome's family members. I imagine that it would result in a huge pile of gifts. My sister says that it's kind of like a pity party for Souta because all his nephews and neices, grand nephews and neices,great grand nephews and nieces, in-laws, so on and so forth, are practically all older than him. Thanks for taking the time to write the story. :)