This story is really good. I especially preferred the beginning with the prey/chase thing. Your end is good too because you leave up to readers to decide. Thanks anyway.

Really loved the note passing part it was cute. Also enjoyed the let out

Goodness logan and his quick wit loved it

Im so into this story sorry for the lack of reviews its because I wanna finish so bad. Awesome job. I knew logan would get jealous and go ororo for sticking up for yourself and hopefully joaqin doesnt have to pay big for his attraction love the side characters entered

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Couldn't stop reading until I got to the end...I'm truly hoping against all hope that there is a completed sequel out but if not, thank you for sharing this piece.

The story was pretty good all the way up till the ending, the ending sucked specially since you labeled it an epilogue.

I know this is know 2012 but I just read this story and it was amazing. You should totally do a sequel.

This story was very interesting. If the writing doesn't catch my attention from the first paragraph, then in my book it isn't worth reading. This story was sooooooo WORTH reading

OMG this fic has everything to like, intrigue, drama, emotional turmoil...it really has me on the edge of my seat... am dyeing to find out what happens now. Don’t leave us in suspense...

I'm loving the story lol yet so emotionally confused I want Ro to be happy and Logan to suffer for her pain yet I want them together ...lol as a reader you'be got me whipped I'm at your mercy for the next update :)...!

Okay, wow. Great writing. Amazing beginning. I cannot wait to get to chapter 2, and that is a rare occurrence.

I got sucked in by the fact that this shares a title with one of my favourite Neal Stephenson novels, and am so glad I stayed. Your writing is lovely and I can't wait to read more of what you've posted.

omg i loovveedd your story! what happens next? i can't wait! please update soon, pretty please with sprinkles on top. you rock! -

Omg this is like the best fanfic I have ever read. Great story, excellent riting, amazing plot etc etc etc. Please update soon plz. I noticed you havent update in a while.

I so need to know how this pans out. ROLO all the way lol

*sighs* Oh my goodness, I'm finally done reading all these chapters! But they are excellent, so I shouldn't be complaining. And its so interesting how you write it. 3rd Person, for me, is the hardest to write, but can make a story seem so beautiful, like yo have done. Another thing: you're REALLY good with dragging things out. About half-way through, I swear I was yelling, "Just get Logan & Ororo back together again!" (lol)

Anyways, wonderful job on this story & hopefully you'll update soon. (or when you can, at least) Thanxs! :) :p ;)