I didn't finish this - not because I wasn't enjoying it but because of own small detail you forgot. It may seem insignificant to you but speech marks ( " " ) actually make a huge difference to the way someone reads a story. It changes the inner voice in our heads from monologue or description to speech and without them i can't properly make the transition from say Daine's description of their palace suite to Numair speaking to her. You'll find most people are like me with this because it's trained into us and with so many stories on this website people (like me) won't give a story with such a crucial grammar device a proper chance. I enjoyed the start of this story but the exclusion of speech marks ruined it for me, which is sad because the rest of your grammar was excellent.

You write nice! And funny. :)

There is something next to illegal about how cute this is. I swear. I loved this so much. The symbolicism vibe I'm getting with that starting scene in the cold and with the animals and then into the simlple-yet-elegant living quarters that Daine shares with Numair just about represents a lot of different ways that Daine's life has changed since she's come to Tortall. Not only that but the ways that Numair has changed to accomadate for Daine and the way that those two are just so sweet and passionate about each other really shines through with all your descripton. And the fire? There was a lot of heat to go around? And Daine popping The Question just topped off such a wonderful story. She's a trendsetter? Someday all the ladies in Tortall will be asking their men to join in matrimony. And Numair. Oh, you made him into such a sweetheart, which he essentially is. Wonderful fic! :D

I love the story, but why don't you use quotation marks?

Lovely fluff ) - lots of lovely random little details as well_. Ok this was written years ago but it deserved a comment so here it is.

(I assume it's just my computer that's showing squares instead of speech marks?)

Fluffy! Great story, very cute and sweet!

Total fluffy beauty~ I love the idea of Daine being the one to finally link to marriage.

this was great. I was looking to hold on a little longer to the world of Daine & Numair, and this brought me there.

That was so sweet. I love you.

whoever wrote this rivals tamoras own works. you truly are an excellent writer, and i love the ending

aww. So cute. Great job.

AW! me gusta mucho... muchas gracias!

that was so sweet! the best way to warm up on a winter's day!

*Wades out of fluff with a giant smile on her face* That was beautiful! I loved it, loved it, loved it! You've completely made my day.. night.. morning... What is 2 am, anyways? But the point is that it was cute.

so unbelievably sweet! i love it. great job!