like the story even though i don't really know the characters on the cross over and just to let you know vampires can be killed by sunlight, fire, and decapatating them not only stake to the heart. instead of buffy ignoring them not helping she should train them to help them defeat the shwartz.

goof idea but you really need to work on your formatting

This story is awesome!the only thing I can think of to critizise is your punctuation which is less than great but far from the worst i've read

Very very interesting.
First time I've read this kind of crossover.
Your story if very fast paced but it seemed people change their minds quite rapidly.
O! I also found some type'Os. Can't remember which chapter though.
Hope you'll finish this fic.

-_-;
They certainly wrapped that up quickly.

This is much better, thank you. If I'd known that you didn't understand what I was telling you I would have given you an example.

Schuldig, not Shouldig.

Finally! They're starting to get things cleared up!

cool. can't wait to see what happens next!

this is getting so good keep it up.
thanks
this rocks

Hi this is cool.
thanks

*sighs*
I suppose I'm just going to have to resign myself to being ignored. Seeing as how you're obviously not going to take any of my advice and make this more legible.

Yes, this is a good idea! Explain things, ask them why they're after you, get everything cleared up. I like a couple of the members of Weiss enough to not want them dead.

continue. how about Buffy breaks a few bones for the next encounter.

Whoa...I've never, ever seen a Weiss and Buffy crossover..I'm shocked but it's a good shcoked..I never even thuoght of it and I'm a huge fan iof both shows...American if ya can't tell and hope ya update soon cause I'd like to no what happens next...
Write on!

*sighs*
Are you completely incapable of proofreading? How about formatting your work so that people can read it without confusion? Really, you should try it. You'll find that you get more readers when your work is comprehensible and without blatant errors.

As for my feelings on the plot, it's still quite good. I rather feel sorry for the kittens, they need someone to sit them down and explain the situation to them. Or at least to overhear the scoobies talking about exactly what they're up against. It will save them a great deal of pain.

come on let them met come on plz this chapter was good through.
thanks

Formatting! You have got to put breaks between the quotations. Every time a new person starts speaking you should create a new paragraph. It is VERY difficult to read the way you've got it.
I'm rather looking forward to Weiss finding out exactly what she does at night. Should be funny seeing their reactions to learning that the target this time is more of a protector of the innocent than they could ever dream. And much the same goes for Schwartz, don't imagine they'll be too impressed by their 'new member' being a white knight.
Nagi and Dawn seem to be getting along.