Aww

Your. Story is so amazing! And I just love the ooc_ness of ryoma.
Oh. And the epilogue, speechless. That was truly a work of art.

It was good. thank you for writing it.

Their kids sound cute. I didn't get confused. You did mention Sakuno thinking about the past before the flashback.

Good story! I'm glad it worked out for them.

I agree that Steffi and her friends are worse than Captain Atobe. Maybe Captain Atobe should ask Steffi to the prom, but then they will crowd and fill the place up with their servants and fans.

I understand what you mean about school and holidays: always keeping us busy.

The story is not horrible, and no one is OOC. As you mentioned, people change, and one of the biggest influences for change is other people.

Sorry I'm not reading most of your stories. It's not because they are bad, but I just don't get along with tragdies. It's nothing against you. I'm sure there are many people who will read them. Sad stories just aren't for me.

I don't find anyone OOC. It's true that people change, but there are parts that remain the same. You did a good job with both.

just to tell you smthin...(not ment as a insult or anything.. i personally liked ur story..) if the twins r different genders they cant be identical twins...

i love it!

love your story!

:D

I think it's a great story. No sequel? Maybe it could be about the twins. That's just a suggestion and either way I still like this fic. Good job!

Nice! Write more Ryoma and Sakuno Fic!

You know, you used Ryoma Echizen, and you used Ryuuzaki Sakuno. Are you writing first name first or vice versa? Because it's better if you stick with one way.

Nice epilogue. It was sweet how they met. Just very fast, considering you divided everything with dividers. (But hey, we're supposed to use them dividers, ne? ;-))

The hug was kinda sudden. They saw each other and hm...

Anyway, yeah, it's good you finished this fic. Ganbattene! :)

It was okay, this chapter. The part containing Eiji was simply hilarious.

Best chapter so far, I agree.

But hey, I've been reading your reviews. (I'm one person with nothing better to do. Don't kill me just yet.)

I think Cinpii was right. And now I know the word I was finding. Lack of maturity, that's right. I know the ideas within chapter are good, but what about wrapping up the entire fic? Try reading the first chapter and then skipping ahead to the seventh chapter. Well it's not going to make much sense, but the characters are very different. Even the way they think, and besides that, you didn't write much of what they thought. But I guess that's okay since you have warned writers about oocness and such.

And the way you describe things as well (I'm not discouraging you to write or anything, but my opinion after reading 7 chapters go in this review.)Try to read The Hobbit (if you haven't already). I think people can improve from reading that. The way you structure sentences are really simple, maybe you can try it another way.

But hey, I liked this chapter anyway. And you started using those italized thoughts again. :(

Okay, I'll finish your fic.

Are you the same person writing the 5 chapters back then? Your writing changed after a year, amazing!

This chapter is a lot better than before, although there are still some grammar mistakes...ah, but you no longer have that wide space between paragraphs, that's good. And I notice that you don't use italics for thoughts. That's good as well. (My opinion is that italized thoughts look very shallow, and I used to do that too.:( )

The ending was kinda screwed, you're right. Although your writing got better, the story still hadn't got any roots. I don't exactly get this fic.

But hey, add in bits of cute moments here and there, and that'll pay the price, ne? You do that well.

I still think that the characters are different from who they were in the first chapter.

Hm, but whatever. I'll like this piece of work anyway. :)