Simplemente la historia, no me esperaba la muerte de Kaoru, pero .buen giro a la historia... :).. mis felicitaciones..

I knew it! I so knew it was gonna be a child

this is wonderful every time i read it... and it makes me cry.

i hope you got to see the 'rurouni kenshin' live action movie(s). if not, there are trailers for the first one and then for the sequel movies. the first movie was a wonderful adaptation and the second was great! the next sequel is promised to be just as good (i'll be watching the third movie today!), the casting was fabulous! just copy/paste the codes into the youtube search for each video:

O4Bhr80HfyY -the first live movie's trailer
yaLOPVAuJs4 -first movie's character profile trailers
8qRFhP5PhMk -first movie's dojo fight scene from the first chapter manga and first episode anime
a7HrF77Ewkg -the sneak preview for the first sequel kyoto arc:
bAgmfGZbVrQ -the first official trailer for the sequel movies (subbed)
NCei4Vm1ZP8 -another trailer
emy8JkKV6LQ -character profile trailers
BSl-T1AioDQ -trailer for the second sequel (no he doesn't die) 'the legend ends'. they had changed the story of the anime for the movie and it is quite interesting and scary in the implications but the director had hinted on another movie (a prequel... hopefully it'll be both remembrance and jinchuu arcs).

the sequels (kyoto arc) have already been released but hopefully they won't be the last ones as i'm counting on big box office numbers again to motivate them to film more... :) ... you can see the all three online at a place called: gooddrama (you can google - gooddrama rurouni kenshin - although i'm not sure it's available in every country) the three movies will be listed: Rurouni Kenshin (2012) or Rurouni Kenshin: Kyoto Inferno (Movie) or Rurouni Kenshin: The Legend Ends (Movie) -they can be watched in any one of the three or four screens on the page in seven or eight parts (different people uploaded each and i usually watch the first on any anime/video site like that *shrugs*) and make sure you have adblocker and run a scan with maleware bytes after any site like that to get rid of any spyware... you can get ghostery as an add-on if you use firefox to stop trackers (i may be extra cautious but it pays to be). i know it's a lot of trouble but i really trust doing all that rather than downloading from bittorrent or something like it. but you can also get the dvds from places like cd-japan or amazon... i will be waiting to see if they will be making anymore before i buy them all in a box set. ;)
enjoy!

Loved the story. It was perfect.

Aww.. Kaoru's the wolf's wife.. Normally I'd run with the idea.. But Kenshin's here to stay.. T_T

Interesting start for Kenshin.. Too bad, other men have the trademark X though..

Great story...but I kinda hate you right now.

So far your fic shows lots of promise but I couldnt help but think that a fic like this will have some angst plus I wasnt sure if I read this before seeing that this was done in '06 so I went on the reviews and found out what happened, I usually dont have a problem with character death unless its my fav character and well my fav character does infact die... even though Im sure I would love this fic im just not into reading that ending, maybe one day I'll find this again

I loved this story! Very well written and the plot was very well developed too! But the end was so sad! Though, I understand and I think it's one of the reasons why this is so good! Great work!

Good story, I just wish it was longer, and a little more developed, but great plot :)

Interesting story so far :) I feel like the chapters are slightly rushed though, but I love the story anyway :)

Oh, interesting story so far :) I will have to continue reading more to find out what happens next :)

Why is it that Karou always has to die? Okay it was good, very well written and a good twist at the end.

D

It could be better if you paced it a little slower in a few parts, maybe engineered a fatefull meeting before his capture?

I think the epilogue was a bit abrupt, and almost rushed at the very end of the chapter. But overall, your writing has been good for the entire fic as a whole. You do have a way with words, and though each chapter is short, it is packed with quality. I think I'd like this fic better, though, if the events in last chapter were explored a bit more thoroughly. Anyway, I wasn't aware it had been 5 years since Kenshin and Kaoru had been separated. But their 5 year old son obviously proves this.