oh I really enjoyed this! It was really intense, and that nightmare that Will had fooled me completely.
Beautiful story!

i love this story ! its great !

I absolutley love it! I would have reviewed every chapter, but I have the annyoing habit off not reviewing a story until teh last chapter :P

I thought the way Jack introduced the idea of children was cute. I thought his revelation, though " YES, ALRIGHT?", was cheesy. When you write Jsck's dialogue, imagine Johnny Depp saying those words and acting them out.

check your spelling! exited is spelt " excited". Check other things, too.

ok..in my last review, i know i said something abut " cheesy", and this chapter is the same. Maybe try using a better transition; it seems very rushed how the Black Pearl was

*suddenly* pulling into port. Expiriment with transitions, and then you will find a good rhythmn for your story. I liked how Elizabeth knew spot on that Jack and AnaMaria were married. Nothing like womanly intuition, eh?

its kind of cheesy, lk the dialogue and plot. Check your grammar, but your spelling and punctuation is fine. thank you for sharing!

I'd review on every single chapter, because that's what you deserve, but I'm too lazy now, maybe tomorrow. I absolutely loved it, I don't know if you'll still read this, I just wanted to let you know... I *loved* it.

aw! That was one of the sweetest stories i've ever read! LOVED IT!

much love from Emma

"You're not making any sense at all" ~Captain Jack Sparrow

omg i loved this story a lot! omg i just about cried when will was dreaming that elizabeth had died, so sad! anywayz im going to read the sequal now, i hope it will be as good as this story was:)

I dont care how long ago you finished this, but,

I am in love with it.

you are an AMAZING writer

I love this story! So cute!

I know that you've already made a sequal to this story, and even though I've read and reviewed it, I just *had* to tell you that this story is *really* interesting to me. Now if you excuse me, I need to talk to to Will, Ana, Liz, and Jack for a moment.

Me: Hey guys, how ya feelin'?

Liz: How do you think we're feelin'!

Will: Liz, calm down. She was just askin' a question.

Liz: I don't care! She read the story, she knows how we feel. What kind 'o question is that?

Will: I know, darling, but ye don't have to snap at her.

Liz: I'LL SNAP AT WHOEVER I FEEL!

Will: Hey, watch yer tone, love!

Liz: No, I have to get this off my chest. Now move it, Turner.

Me: If you'll excuse me, I'll go find Jack n' Ana now.

Liz: Whatever.

Will:*whispers to Shy Pirate Lass* She still has her mood swings.

Me: I've noticed. Bye, Will, and good luck! :)

Well, I don't want my whole review to be about me taliking to the characters. So I won't converse with JHack and Ana. See ya, mate!

P.S. YOUR STORY IS TOTALLY WICKED! *wink* Keep up the good work.

P.S.S. This story is on my fav. list. Now, I think I should go help Will before Lizzie decides to pummel him.

So adding to my favorites!

This was soo incredibly cute! I didn't know The Angels He'd Die For was the sequel to this. (no offense but I don't read author's notes much) Anyway I actually grasped the concept without reading Too Much Like Her. Anyway hope you update the sequel soon and write more POTC: JA fics!