Reviews for Tears of Joy Tears of Sadness |
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![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() It needs more story line is actually surprised that you dont have more people flaming how the story goes here.I look forward to seeing what the story will produce. |
![]() ![]() Hmm. Your grammar, punctuation, and syntax are kinda icky. However, you have a good story here. Try to make the chapters longer. Good luck. |
![]() ![]() I like your tale, it would most likely be the way things happened |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, as far as I've read. Minor grammar and tense items (He didn't bit you did he.) but you've done a good job developing Tanya. Regards. W. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *squeals* I love this! Please hurry up and update again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this chapter. you do a great job of building D's past and matching it to the movies... nice job! can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Note to self longer chapters dammit. |
![]() ![]() I really like ur story, please continue, ur a very skilled writer, u have me hooked, I hope to c more Sabriel |
![]() ![]() You need to hury & wright more, more i teel you.I'm adicted. |
![]() ![]() I love it! please keep writeing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do have a few problems with this...LONGER LONGER LONGER LONGER CHAPTERS! *ahem* Now that that's out, I can't wait to see what's next! Hurry this time! :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that's really good! i love dracula's attitude, definitely a plus on that. can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe that so sweet that d's mom love dracula and he loved her back i can't wait for the next chapter to be written |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh. i like this... um...it seems so true...O.O this isn't happening in some alternate universe is it? oh well..umm...go story go romance go you! wish i could write as good as you. |