please write more, i like this story. i would like to know what happen to kai and ray

OMG! I can't wait to read the next chapter! The story is freakin good! .

man thats harsh when a computer bombs on you. taht almost happened to me and i almost quit.

anway this is a really well written story.

what exactly did ray fail?

its really gud keep it up!

-reviews- I _like_ this chapter. Subtext is love. And killing fuzzy little animals will SEND YOU TO HELL! ...except not.

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smiles- "oh yay!im so happy that you updated! i was starting to forget about how the story has gone! -hugs- i loved this chapter! and the animal eating part was so cool! i could just see all the insides in me head b/c im a weirdo -laughs- well please hurry and update! i must see what happends next! _ yay!

That wuz such a funni and awesome fic that u wrote! Please continue updating! Pretty please?

Great! Keep going. Love it. Bye!

luv it

this is really great

I like the way Rei speaks...

I am most certainly looking forward to the next chapter

xoxoxox

_; wasn't "chapter five" the last chapter you wrote? o hope you'll continue soon!

ok just hurry and upload the 5th chapter! ok? by the way the storys great so far i think! bye

We'll live with the wait UU

ciao

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Spencer in the blondes name...great fic, but you could add more moments between Ray and Kai..kk_

Those changes in second chapter were good, but I just dont get what you changed in first chapter?

Anyway, this is good story and I really like your plot. Atleast now it seems to be very good.

Please be kind and continue soon, I wanna know what Kai is going to do with Rei.

COL!