Reviews for Once Upon a Paopu Fruit |
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Guest chapter 6 . 1/1/2018 All three XD |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1/2018 KYAAAAA! |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/1/2018 It's REALLY good so far. Im looking foward to this. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/1/2018 GAH! *nosebleed* XD LOVE IT! |
pigfartss chapter 6 . 11/6/2011 Yay! Riku is beleiving! Kisses! *dies from fangirl attack* |
Hyperpegasi chapter 10 . 6/22/2009 That was . . . Strange. In a good way, though. I think. XD Good job. |
Hyperpegasi chapter 3 . 6/21/2009 ' Oh…it just Sora’s hair tickling my nose… Riku closed his eyes again and tightened his grip around the boy who promptly responded by snuggling up closer to Riku’s chest. Suddenly Riku’s eyes snapped open. WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING?' XD ROFL! Took him long enough to figure it out. LMAO! Greatness! |
Klaine Wonderland chapter 3 . 10/2/2008 I love this story, it's so cute, love the love. |
DarknekoKurai chapter 10 . 5/16/2008 this is so cute |
sailormulti01 chapter 3 . 5/3/2008 LOL! I was just going to Riku's part, where he says "Why me..?" Then, "I Won't Say I'm In Love" from Hercules started to play on my playlist. I cracked. Even my PlayList thinks they are destined together! Hahahahhaha! |
sailormulti01 chapter 2 . 5/3/2008 ... Ouch... Last line has to hurt... like... ouch... |
Raiderday chapter 10 . 7/15/2007 Wow. That was very good. It's definately an interesting take on both Sora and Riku. I loved it all the same. Good story. |
jojobeans93 chapter 10 . 6/23/2007 its the last chapter!NO! *grabs bowl of random fruit to hurl at you* im just kidding it was so cute! and RIku in shiny panties 0_0 heheheheh oh wait...thats a different rating category, lol thank god you didnt put in any male pregnatcy...i would have fainted... ANYWAYZ...i had originally thought the story was about the older charaters, but then i read the red jumpsuit line.I was like "huh"? and then i saw when this was written...before KH2 even came out lol. IT WAS SO AWESOME! l love you...and The Ambitious Blank for their help?(well helping you write this) i think? yea... -Jojobeans93 |
Nevyn chapter 7 . 5/1/2007 You know, I never liked Kairi b/c she was the love intrest to keep Sora and Riku apart. But you write her in a way that makes me feel sorry for her. Grr on you! . |
Nevyn chapter 5 . 5/1/2007 Oh! The fruit has a horrible side effect... It causes... male pregnancy! Hehe. Oh! Wait... I'm suddenly getting a great idea for a story. Oh, no... Anyway, thought that comment about Sora now being pregnant was just adorable. |