I had some free time to do a little writing today, and I blame you for not getting anything accomplished.

Had to start in on your PotC stuff after enjoy your Hook and Wendy story.

Lovely portrayal of Jack here, really. He's tough for most writers to capture because its not just about what he says and how he says it, but the fact that he's so darn busy! All sorts of expression, and gesture and nuance to convey, and you did it here.

Again, very fun!

Cheers!

Nytd

Wonderful! I loved it, absolutely loved it! You did a wonderful job with it! The descriptions, the emotions, the feelings! Brilliant!

This was AMAZING. I loved when Jack said "bless you", I honestly never thought I would hear, (or technically read) Jack say that, but it actually works, which is wonderful.

I am addicted to your (potc) stories, they are phenominal. And thanks so much for the link to your livejournal! I am quickly making my way through all your lists of stories. They are incredible.

Thanks again so much! *hugs!*

-haleyXsparrow-

Wow. Way to get in-depth, with both Jack and Elizabeth.

Poor Jack. :(

Great writing!

Ah. Some good JE reading. Nice! I liked it a lot.

'I'm still not convinced that he's not a eunuch,"

Haha.

Interesting to read, all of it, I mean.

Great job! I especially enjoyed the "dangerous honesty" part. Very nice.

Very well done and interesting to read if i may say so myself

ooh i like :)

Very good story, you've got talent so keep writing :)

Loved it! Raising a glass to some very well characterized J/E storyline! :D ~HR

That was...wonderful. Simply bloody wonderful. I loved this so much, I have no words!

wow

Ah, another WONDERFUL read. You're such an incredible author. You truly are. Your portrayal of pirates is also, by the way, exquisite. I'm still debating whether I'm more in love with Hook or Sparrow, to tell you the truth, all thanks to you. Lol. :)

-C. Callispi

"A pox and a curse on that vile, wondrous man."

I love it!

oh COME on what a crule ending !