Reviews for The Phoenix and the Serpent
Sikanda chapter 10 . 7/13/2014
I really like this story is definitely explores the whole nature vs nuture argument...Yes Tom is going to have some issues he definitely has some sociopathic tendencies...but then again don't many of us? I can't blame him for locking his sister in the attic after she destroyed his project because there are many siblings that do those things to each-other...It doesn't mean they don't love each-other though! The big difference here is Tom was raised to know right from wrong and he feels remorse and guilt the old Tom wouldn't! So yes while Tom will always have to fight off his darker side with the support of his family and friends there is no reason he has to give into to it! :)
Guest chapter 10 . 9/16/2013
This is awesome
Sparxana chapter 10 . 3/11/2013
Love it! Though, it is rather agonizing to know that you haven't updated in such a long time! There might not be a chance that you will update this story ever again. . . but I can only hope, can't I?
Blazestar of Shadowclan chapter 10 . 12/4/2012
I like it! This is cool, the characters are realistic and believable. Update soon!
TerraZeal chapter 10 . 10/30/2012
I know its been a long time since you wrote for this, but please continue! I love it. This is such an awesome premise.
Yami Tenno 3 chapter 10 . 7/31/2011
Wow this story is good! I know you havn't updated in like 5 years but if you can i would love that!
Daniella chapter 10 . 3/16/2011
Great story! I love your idea of defeating Voldemort by de-aging him and than raising him to have love,compassion, respect... Usually stories talk about Harry going back in time- so this is a nice change.

Wow, creepy chapter! It kept me enraptured until the end. Real creepy to imagine what Tom would have been like at the orphanage-if he did this after being raised by Harry and Ginny.

I liked how much trust Harry had in Tom, in the end. Poor traumatized Lily...

Can I expect to see more of adult Harry? Like he goes to Hogwarts for a dueling tournment and shows how good a fighter he is- or something like that? Although, I really have no complaints about the story being Tom-centered.

Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to your update.

Daniella
Paint Me Violent chapter 10 . 2/27/2011
I know that reviewing won't give anything after fife years, but the story is SOOO interesting, even if it is incomplete. I simply love the story.
Anon chapter 10 . 2/22/2011
Damn. I was hoping it would get to something of a good part before it was abandoned forever. Thank you for a good story so far, at least. I hope you one day finish this.
Anon chapter 3 . 2/22/2011
Maths. It's called Maths. Unless Adam is American, please take care to make sure the characters are speaking British English.
kloudklocvalley chapter 10 . 2/13/2011
Out of all the chapters so far, I'm loving the tenth the best. It certainly adds meat to Tom's character, and the event is so firmly stuck in his memories that it seems he's determined not to disappoint his parents. At first, I was a little sceptical of this story, but the idea was good, and I got hooked by the time I had finished the first chapter. This story is quite intriguing and unique, so I'll really be looking forward to the future chapters.
rm chapter 10 . 11/18/2010
i know u last updated this long time ago...and will probably not continue finishing this fic...or maybe you wouldn't even read this review...but i really liked it!its so different...and tom's character is really well written...he is still as ambitious but a lil different...sometimes scary...in this chapter esp!i wish you would continue.
Ceilo chapter 10 . 8/13/2009
Wow, this story is really amazing! Great job on it, I love how Tom's character is in this. I like jennifer and Julian as well! And of course Medusa rocks! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Sean Mulligan chapter 10 . 12/4/2008
I wish you would update this fic.
Ilaaris chapter 10 . 7/20/2008
This is a wonderfully original tale. I hope that you update soon.
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