Oh my god! Please do make a sequel! I absolutely loved reading this story! Very nicely written and I loved reading your little authors notes! Very amusing! Also loved the part at the end. Th whole "oh no! I've given birth to a yaoi fan!" And then "Hey Gem, wana see some real kissing?" Totally friggen awesome and funny!

Well I wouldn't complain if you did write the lemon... and I'm sure that there are lots of others out there that would be just as happy! Very nicely written make-out session by the way!

lol XD 'ROUGE:I've given birth to a youi fan' HAHA LMFAO XD

lol mini comic or play thats better but nice job

Why no LEMON!?

In the sequel can you add my fancharacter?
Sapphire takeshi [she has her moms middle name, lol] hedgesune
Female
Blue eyes, sapphire blue fur, small green ribbon that ties her bangs together, blue gloves that have symbols like silver's, orange turquoise and purple shoes [ orange on most of the shoe, turquoise for the belt, and purple for the buckle ], black socks, and [ if you guessed right ] kitsune twin tails [ takes after her uncle tails ], [ o' course a tan/ peach muzzle, ears, and chest fluff that looks like [ imagine ] a v with a line going to the bottom of the v 'kay? [ imagining stops ]]
she always has a Blue Chaos Emerald so she can use her chaos abilities, can control water, and [ like her uncle silver ] use her psychic move/ abilities.
Please consider using her in one of your stories. Thank You.

*sniff* thank god Sonic is ok. Thank you Shadow it's a good thing he knows you are still alive.

I don't care if the Chapter was shot it was well written.

( not my FF username but my DA)

*gasp* Oh my gosh SONIC! NO don't let them rape you. Shadow you better save him and show those guys who they are messin with.

Any way great story you are such a good writer. Now I'm going to go and cont. reading and see what happens next. Sayonara!

I've decided. Even if I didn't love your writting, I would still consider moving to kentucky and stocking you -o- don't worry, that would require possesing money ;p haha I don't have any and probably never will. Still I love you, your writting and posibly your sister. For the love of god stay awesome

Why roaches?That's nasty. I mean i've seen some really nasty things,but being RAPED BY COCKROACHES that is nasty.

'Oh no, I've given birth to a yaoi fan!'
Best part ever! Got me rolling around with laughter!
Luv it!
SPC

is there more?

i loved please continue ;)

Love it!

Aww, really cute story! Love it!

Would you mind reading my Sonadow story Shadic's Scream Test and give me a review or some criticism?