Your Mayhem fics are as good as the Mutants of Bucktown fics

Couriosity got the better so I thought I'd check your AGU series and so far I'm not disapointed. I remember Vince from your Hellfire and Brimstone story and so it's nice to see the character again even if Rogue being with him feels a little off after getting so used to him and Emma.

Sinister as always is a brillant sociopath. His treatment of the prodigy kids, especially poor April, really does make one wish he could be killed

Also one minor thing but THANK YOU FOR BRINGING LOCKHEED INTO THIS! loved tht little critter since I first saw him in Astonishing X-Men, well on to the next story, peace out!

Waiiiiiit...
Vincent thought he was going to an airport?
How did he expect to get all those weapons through customs?

This is an awesome story. I think the song "Hand of Sorrow" by Within Temptation fits your character Vincent quite nicely.

great stuff

I know I'm only in the first part of the series, but I have an idea for that asylum-bound 'Prodigy' character...it's actually one I've had for some time, and this gives me the PERFECT way to get the character active; PM me for the details if interested, unless you've already done something using that character.

I'm liking this story a lot since it has a martial artist! XD

Loved this whole series, hope you make yet another sequel. Great chapter too!

I accept the April thing it's very emotional and shows how dagerous the power booster is. You're the writer it's your choice, I just hope you choose to have her tombstone read April Freeman, as she pretty much was Vincent's sister.

Loved, it great chapter. And pretty much the greatest way for Rogue to get his memories that I could never think of.

I assumed The Brotherhood but even without them this was an awesome! The fight was wicked but my favorite part was Of course the end, it was just so frekin smooth

I have to say I loved Vincent reversing the trunk thing, and I think ti was funnier because it was set up by the other two

well as I said in my last review I didn't want Vincent to have to many powers but he at least can use them intelligently. still I would have preferred one power with multiple uses instead of a plethora of powers (although you do explain the reason for a few of the extra ones) all in all its still a good fic and I'll keep reading and hope you write a fic one day with only one power in it (i think a great character could be based off of Vincent's energy manipulation powers). Anyway these are just my thoughts, you're the author and of course have every right to make the character and story you want.

Interesting new character. I like that you limited his super speed to a short amount of time. It makes more sense as I imagine moving that fast would burn up alot of energy! I look forward to the upcoming chapters and new powers (though hopefully you don't go too overboard, I know how tempting it would be to add alot of powers).

love the story, but "happy go lucky valley girl's" favorite color's arent always pink ya know! cuz mines green, uve got her 'tude and style down awesomely but pink! honestly! srry, her fave color prob is pink but, for the record about more than half of "valley girl's" fav colors if blue or green. ) srry i get really touchey sometimes...hehe. keep writin tho ure amazing!