That was beautiful! I love the rhyme scheme, the impact of the repeated lines (esp. the follow and lead parts) and the way you were able to convey his thoughts was amazing! Loved this!

GREAT poem! Especially the "lead and follow" part. That is just great.

wow, this was just so... beautiful. i am in awe of your style, and your ability to rhyme, it's just so absolutely beautiful. do you give lessons?

you managed to convey their feelings so perfectly, that... i want to cry.

i think i'll go off and read some of your other creations, to see if they're as good as this one was...

What can I say, I just love it, Your poems are just awesome, I cant wait to read more of your poetry. Keep up with your great writing -

Oh wow! Oh wow, wow! Excellent!

WHOA! You can make a rap song for that? You sure you didn't steal those lyrics from Busta Ryhmes?

Hello! Just like to say...EXCELLENTA! BRAVO! and bye!
~Kanatasha!~
~Potatoe Queen~