I really like your story. I especially like the description of why Ryan likes to stare at the ceiling - what he gets out of it. I also like the cheese analogy. Cute. A small factual error: if you unplug a phone, callers don't get a busy signal, the phone just keeps ringing.

wow...you are such and introspective writer...i love it!
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I really like it. Please continue! "So you're saying Oliver is mouldy cheese?" that cracked me up!

I loved everything you did in this small fic. It represents all the swirling emotions and conflicting feelings that Ryan might be feeling, perfectly. You are an excellent writer and I hope you write more OC fics in the future.

Very, very good! I really liked that. Very Ryanish! Plz read and review my stuff plz! thanx a bunch!

An excellent character piece. You did Ryan justice.

WOW youre now doing OC fics. Im so happy :). I always liked your Third Watch ones and now you took on my other fav show. Good work!

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i really like the story. i love all of the guys on the oc 9ryan seth luke and sandy)they are all so great and funny. i was so pissed off that no one believed ryan i hope you go deeper into that especially considering that since ryan is all new to this it might take him a little longer to get his trust back when everyone didn't believe him . i especailly was ticked off at marrisa hope you continue.

wow. i like your cheese analogy! and you're description of the 'off' condition. nice job

this is a really good story please update

Nice. Very well done. You got into his head perfectly. Awesome job.