Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

this fic is beautiful and wonderfully written

absolutely loved this one! The way you played on their griefs and their need to forgive was brilliant. Very well written and very emotional (also, you kept the two perfectly in character) Great story!

they are my favourite couple but almost no one write about the so thanks for it was really good, i love it you are definitely talented :D

xoxo
love and temptations

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Beautiful! Really angsty but it a touching way

Nice one!

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This was so beautiful. You actually made me cry. And that never happens.

The complexities of right versus wrong combined with the grief that cuts regardless was captured perfectly.

Oh, Percy.

First off- the negative aspects I found in your story. The pairing isn't really to my liking- and where is Harry or Hermione? Surely Ron would not forget his best friend and once crush?

However- the positive side now. This story has emotion, real emotion. It is brilliantly weaved together. The words seem to flow. The words, simply- they work. Example: "fists would sail through the air". Poetic, and it gives a feeling of lightness- emptiness, yet manages to convey the meaning.

In conclusion- the pairing cannot be helped, the only thing I object to was the disappearances of Harry and Hermione. Other than that- I cannot say strongly enough how much I liked this story. It really is excellent. x Smaginn

I love it, such a beautiful story! I love your writing style. That mental picture of Mrs Weasley setting a plate and cutlery and a glass for Percy at every meal is so heart-breaking. Draco and Ron finding healing together, that's such a sweet ending, showing that even in times of great despair, there is a beacon of hope. Lovely!

Do I really have to keep reviewing all of your stories? Well, this review is going to be all, or maybe most, of your stories in general. I love them all. Your writing style, your plot, pretty much everything. I bet you could make one of the nastiest pairings look good. I would write more, but I am eager to read more of your fanfiction. So I will see you later. n-n

that's so beautiful!

Ok - now I'm convinced! They are... or maybe its just your writing - oh lovely! Thanks again x3 for such wonderfulness. I've got those tingles on the insides of my knees! :D

HulaHula

Gawd... I love all your writing

wonderful. Ron's story about Percy was so sad, but felt like a scary possibility.

"Lucius was Draco’s father - and Draco’s father was dead. Not Death Eaters, or criminals, but a father, a brother, a son. Ron couldn’t bring himself to grieve for Lucius. No, he did not mourn his death, he celebrated it, but it didn’t escape him that people could say the same about Percy. "

This is a fantastic paragraph. All too often people forget that those who do horrible deeds are still human, with human families. Fantastic piece.