This was a good fanfic of Chris reflecting on her short friendship with Yun something I was touch by when I played the game but I preferred how the manga presented it myself.

Nevertheless this is very good and well written.

Super cool! The part where Nash coomforts Chris, well, I couldn't help but get a little tingly. Besides that, it's so deep and sad... You really captured Chris's feeling and thoughts. Well thought out and a great piece of work. _

Awesome portrayl of Chris!

This piece was emotional and very true to Chris's character, I felt. I liked it very much.

I loved this. A very strong piece! I always contemplated writing a fic about the brief but fascinating encounter between Chris and Yun, but I wasn't entirely sure how to approach the idea. But you just did this so well, I really admire your style of writing in this, it's very inspiring!

And of course, I very much appreciated the part where Nash comforted Chris. Even the slightest Nash/Chris interaction makes me very happy!

Anyway, this is going on my favourites list. Thanks for the great fic, and I hope to see more fics from you in the future!

This truly is beautiful. You sound just like Chris, and really help the reader to understand her point of veiw better.
I'm usually not this serious, I'm just in serious... 'wow'. I can't use any other word to describe it- I'm a one syllable kind of person anyway. All in all: amazing. Keep writing, please.

Beautiful. This made my morning!
I really think you captured Chris here, and you gave her a strong, yet tenacious voice. The descriptions are strong, too.
THanks for sharing _