alot twists in story

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are u planning to update this storie?

if ur not..let me say its a completely waste of a excellent plot

i mean its really original, and the way u portrait the characters...omg..sometimes it seems like a novel...

u should consider re-writte the chapters..make them longers and remove all FFVI related things...so u can publish ur own book

this is the best story i've ever read!

plz keep working on it!

kisses!

Wow this story is amazing. It's so different and entertaining. Gave me a whole new way of thinking about Rinoa. One of the best stories out there.

i think it's amusing that there could be any people who would be that easily offended by this story. i think it's great. love the whole kick ass rinoa aspect. muy bueno.

You do realize that this needs to be updated soon right?

You're killing me here.

u shouldnt write a story on how many reviews you get

you should write a story because you want to and because of people reading it

this is one hell of an amazing story

the way it is written right from the start

you have wonderfully portrayed rinoa's and squall's relationship with each other and the plot of the story is original i have never read a simialr one

please continue writing this story and i promise to review every single chapter ( i was going to but i got caught so caught up with reading it i have basically read it in one sitting )

look forward to the next chapter

et voilà, encore une fic que j'ai adoré.

Oh, wow.

That's all I can say.

Wow.

You see a lot of stories about gang wars and politics and such, but this one is absolutely unique. I can see you weren't kidding when you said you were going to push your writing skills to the limit. The original plot, the descriptive language, the realistic take on Squall and Rinoa's relationship; this is one of the most beautifully-written works of literature I've ever read. I can honestly say I'd be devastated if you left this unfinished, and I can only hope that if and when things have settled down, you'll pick up where you left off. I know "Good luck" probably won't cut it, but all the same, I wish you the best and hope that you'll continue writing, whether it be in a month or even five years from now.

"It's not goodbye, it's see you later."

&& ankosune.

This is a very unique and beautifully written story! I love it a lot. Its very refreshing to stories with compelling plots that pulls you in at the very beginning. Simply beautiful! Anyways I'm going to read the rest of your story!

This is an amzing Fanfic, I've spent the last few hours reading from chapter one to chapter 27 and the way it has played out and has been tied together is absolutely flawless, It is a fresh change to have an author on this site with at least a base understanding of the human psyche though I would say from what I hagve read it seems to be quite a bit more then base level. Its also refreshing not having one of the little utopia relationships like you run into on so many other fanfics but instead the symbiotic/addictive relationship which has evolved and been in explored in this piece. I hope to read some more on this story soon, wishes to your success. -Roth Darkshield

Pathetically enough reading that little story actually made me want to go drinking, and I don't drink so...Wow. Unfortunately we all know the migraine that they'll have when the sober up will cure that!

It honestly made me sick to my stomache. Not because the writing was bad, but because of what you described...I guess you warned the readers in the first chapter's authors note, but I guess I'm overly sensitive.

I'd kinda already picked up on the change you made to Ellone, and while it doesn't bother me because her character truly did have to twist a little to fit into the story I don't see much of her left. Which is understandable because she truly was a '2D' Character in the game, it's hard to really pin down much about her. (Especially when you consider that I haven't played the game in over a year.)