ooh! very nice! i liked it! it was really well done. you know, i've always wondered...if mai woke up when Joey was unconcious because of Marik, do you think that she might not have joined Dartz? ...that might make an interesting story someday...O! btw, yes. I hate Serenity as well. She is justan annoying little squish bug! Almost as annoying as Suberu from .hack/sign . (almost, but not quite.)

(p.s. squish bug is my term for a little annoying stupid, retarded, dumb...etc. person.)

hehheh...anyways, great story! I look forward to reading more of your work! For now though, Ja mata!

~~ Chibi Tora ~~

Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

i luved da story! so kool! u gotta write more with MAI AND JOEY! THAT IS MY FAV COUPLE FRUM YUGIOH!

Aw. That was so sweet. The story is going to my favorites

I love your storys man everyone does you must be on the favorite list of everyones if you want come and read mine.

i don't hate serenity. your a mean person. you (beep).bye bye meany!

I loved the whole fic. Awesome Joey and Mai are my absolute all time favorite couple.

Lovin the Joey/Mai thing.

I'm so putting your story on may fav list,LOVE IT!

Oh, why is it over? Why? this was one of the good stories. one problem, i don't like the Serenity-bashing, I happen to like Serenity! No wonder she's clingy, look what's happened to her! And she's trying to get out of her shell, if everyone would give her a chance. But that's enough of that, it's not about Serenity. You wrote a really great Joey/Mai fic. Ever think of doing a sequel of this one? Whether it follows the series or not, I would love to read a sequel!

it was interesting, the coupeling did seem a bit rushed but i thought it was awsome. they should've let you write the episode instead of the version they used. i loved it.

A great plot! Written okay, and fluffy to to extreme! i LIKE IT!

Great story. And Serenity's a loser. She is like around thirteen and is too attached to Joey. Serenity should die.

Wait a sec... I thought I reviewed this! *_* Ah well, *sniff* the end! When things end it's always SO sad. Even if they're bad. :P I never have that problem with my stories since I never update! *ducks* Yeah... uh... cool ending, it was so cute! Yeah!

Ahh! You updated this too! Jeez, I should have put you on author alert a long time ago. LOL, so, how are you? *gets hit with tomato* Hey, is it a crime to ask how someone is doing? *gets pelted with another tomato* Anyway, great epilogue. I was hoping for a little more Yami/Tea, but that's okay. The Mai/Joey was great. _ Well, great chapter, great ending, great story. 'Nuff said. Hope you write another story like this soon.

Jelly