Really good story but...the ending left much to be desired. A previous reviewer said this story needs more recognition and I agree. You write really well and then you get to the end of the story and the reader is left wanting...it’s not really an ending at all. Is there a part two to this I wonder?

This story needs more recognition. I feel that Sesshumaru is very in character, and I love that in the end he came through to recognize that even he cannot impose his will on anyone.

Thank you for writing this!

Well that's confusing. I can't tell if he likes her or doesn't. XDD Or both. Probably both. Thank you very much for writing this! It was interesting.

So pretty. The interactions are lovely too. I loved the bit between Inuyasha and Kagome. It was so honest. ;-;

OH BOY.

WHOA. g.

el final bastante soso por no decir fatal no me gusto nada

Cristina Pacheco

Wait, so do Sesshoumaru ando Kagome end up together? Does she plan to return to him if the Well allows? Or shall she stay with Inuyasha? So many unanswered questions!

This was a rather good and very original story. I greatly enjoyed it even though I would have loved to see a bit more fluff. Perhaps that's just my fluff addiction talking. I really enjoyed the ending though and how Sesshomaru accepted his feelings for Kagome. I however find myself wishing for a sequel about their courting filled with fluff.

Great story! Loved it!

I dont like that game it scares me lot!

Great story, but I am totally confused by that last little bit. What is Sesshoumaru trying to say? That his feelings for Kagome disappeared? Seriously? After all that fuss, he just doesn't care about her anymore?

I just read your whole story and I love it. Good job and I wish I knew if Sesshie and Kagome got together. .

This is one of those lovely tales you re-visit from time to time. Thank you

Interesting story.

1sunfun