I know I’m reading this 13-14 years after it was written, but I couldn’t not say anything. This is one of the best stories I’ve read on this site, hands down. Well done!

Your Hermione astonished me. She really is one hell of a woman. I cry so hard when she stabbed herself. Thank you for writing this beautiful story.

Good

Finally... that was an emotional rollercoaster... enjoyed and hated it at parts... unique fic though and for that thanks.

Evil!

Finally! And ur stilo evil!

7/22/2015

So much angst...

Evil! Evil i tell you! Cliffies! Aaargh!

7/22/2015

You are evil! So much trouble for harry you gave, feels angsty... ish... really hope for a sweet ending though...

7/22/2015

OK honestly this story had a lot of potential to be really fun. First off I'm not bashing you or your story but I want to leave my criticisms in a positve way.
The story and premise itself is fun lighthearted and somewhat adventurous, but I find that the characters personalities and interactions bring it down.
I managed to reach chapter 9 before deciding to stop here because I just couldn't take the way it kept going.
Harry constantly fawns over Hermione, pisses her off, and then regrets it with his 'friends' saying how much of an asshole he is. This harry, in my opinion is a straight up idiot. He never learns from his mistakes, he just makes a half added apology and then makes them again in a few hours.
Now his so called 'friends' who don't do anything to actually help his character, try to help him change the way he thinks, and dont realize he was abused from a young age and actually never understood what love is, also kind of tick me off.
Ron knows he had bars in his window for Pete's sake, and all he does is laugh at his mishaps, and then get angry when he doesn't know how to properly act.
Neville and Ginny come across as complete and utter jerks. After they find out harry is having these issues with his feelings they not only ask him his opinion on their perfect little romance, but they proceed to ask him who is going to the ball with RIGHT IN FRONT OF HERMIONE. The person whom he is having major issues interacting with daily. What the hell? Also, they have already tried forcing him to talk with her after divination with Firenze and we all saw how that went.
Also why haven't they told the headmaster yet? A love potion of any degree is treated with the utmost care, and I'm pretty sure is banned at Hogwarts. Everyone is the story feels like either morons, inconsiderate jerks, or layabouts who don't actually go beyond the person of someone.

I'm sorry I really tried to get into this story but its just to much of an endless cycle in which everyone has negative interactions with each other. I have nothing against you either, so I wish you good luck with the rest of your works.

Oh. I don't even know what to say. 'NOOOOOOO' obviously but you deserve so much more. I love the choice of vocabulary that you use and everything. I love the Hermione and Harry that you created. It's just beautiful. See you in the next chapter.

Oh my, this as a wonderful story. At first I wasn't sure if I'm gonna like it because I don't like the idea of the love from a test-tube, however, I love your style of writing as well as humour. I am so happy that I have still 15 chapters to read!

A really good story.

This is awesome!
Harry is charming!
Hermione is lovely!
And you are simply B-R-I-L-I-A-N-T!

Love this story!

The angst was so thick, you could cut it with a knife. But, the romance was worth it.