Reviews for When He Was Mine
loubu202 chapter 3 . 5/29
Why are you using three dots so much? It made the dialogues sounded like the speakers stuttered :v
loubu202 chapter 2 . 5/23
Omg I want updates plssssssssss
Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2018
I’m mad at Kagomes mom for calling her a slut I would have been like see ya me and dad will meet up to find a place tomorrow
NarukoSon chapter 42 . 11/25/2017
great story, thanks for it. it was beautiful
Candie chapter 23 . 1/26/2017
Love how you added that John Denver song in there. Love this story
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 14 . 8/7/2016
Okay, in the recent chapters I am really starting to hate Kikyo. I've always hated Kikyo before but this just beats all the hate I have for her. It makes me want to take her into a back alley with all of my gang, and beat the shit out of her as if she couldn't make a payment she owed. Ohhhh I really hate Kikyo... she reminds me why I hate people like her. Gold grabbing bitches, greed sex whores. Excuse my language but this is describing my hate for Kikyo, the one character next to Naraku that I hate. Naraku has his moments in some stories, those kind moments I absolutely adore about him. Like the story "I love my father."
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 33 . 4/7/2015
Wow...his jealousy is intense lol And his personality is a bit out of character :P but I loved it. It was different from his usual hot headed arrogant self. Hmm...isn't the slut role supposed to be Kikyo's? xD
WireWeaver chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
Hi Maggz! I've been following your work for a long time, and you are one of my fav authors. I've gathered a long list of fics and such over the years and had them all saved to my computer, but my computer crashed and I lost everything. This has taught me a hard learned lesson; Always have a back-up ready. So, what I was wondering is if you also wrote a Sesshomaru/Rin fic. It started off by her telling the story of how they met. She was a teen in a rehab home or hospital called Sacred Heart. Her parents had died in a car accident and Sesshomaru more so pulled her out of her despair. They end up falling in love although he resists because she is so much younger. I could swear I saved it under your name, but after so long maybe I am not recalling the info right. I can't find this story on the internet. If it is yours could I possibly have a link to it or a copy? This time I have a 16GB flash drive I am saving all my fav fics on. Thanks. Lori
notorious angel chapter 42 . 1/16/2015
i will only say one word...WOW
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2014
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Cetacea92 chapter 42 . 12/15/2013
Amazing story. So glad that they found each other again.
mya chapter 11 . 5/20/2013
Absolutely love your story but I can't seem to find ch 11-14 on the adult version. Can you plz tell how to get there step by step. I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you :)
CrazyFanGirl chapter 42 . 4/21/2013
I loved the portrayal of the ending could have been a bit better. Per say her having to bring him out of a drunken stupor to save his life. Something a little bit more elaborate.
Sincerely
CrazyFanGirl-:)
P.S. Thanks for a great story! :)
Harper Morgan chapter 42 . 3/7/2013
gah! I love this story so much .
Jana chapter 42 . 2/5/2013
OMG! you are really Good! you should make a sequal..to awser all my questions? what about kikyo
Will inuyasha and kagome have children or married?
Koga?shippo?Sango?miroku?
But i love inuyasha
Please make a sequal!
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