I love this series it’s so good.

Good story!

please write more

After encountering so many stories that seem only to bash Amanda it's so nice to find one that gives her some good character development. While I wold have prefered her spellcasting abilities form the comics the powers you gave here are a very good fit for the Evoverse.

Spiderman's and Morbius's (god I miss 90's Spider-Man cartoon) appearances were also a lot of fun.

Ah Graydon Creed, arguably the most depraved and pathetic X-Villain ever. I'm hoping he get's his at some point in this sprawling multi part epic. Well peace out man!

Ah Deadpool the great merc with a mouth never ceases to crack me up with his antics. XD

Really enjoying your AGU stories and finished the first of the Spider-X series. :)

I'm gonna say it again: your stories are always great. As long as you make Spider-Man fictions, I will read them.

The second time reading this chapter which is now, I kinda laughed at the end.

I've just started reading this series for the second time. I have to say, I really like all your X-Men/Spider-Man stories.

I hope you make yet another sequel for this series. Oh, btw, great chapter.

this story is pretty good and i know it is to late to say this but vincent's new power isn't really that cool it would have been better for him to get a mental power like telepathy or telekinesis or both

Deadpool is awesome (and he threw out some one-liners yay), and Bullseye is also pretty badass, but I've gotta say Gauntlet seems to be the best out of the three with these examples. Only because Kurt, and Joseph spoted the other two mercs and Gauntlet was only seen by Jubilee who he kidnapped. Although I still say Deadpool is the best.

Yay Deadpool :)

Also I have a strange suspicion that Bullseye, Guantlet, and Deadpool won't be very good with the whole sharing and working together as a team.

I think It'd actually be hard for Kurt and Amanda to teleport to each other, because Amanda isn't that good at teleporting and Kurt's porting releases sulfer which you know Logan would pick up on in a second.

The FOH bastards are gonna be surprised when they nab Rogue, and Amanda, and Jamie too I hope, he's been training with Vincent he should be able to kick some ass on his own plus if he's knocked down three of him will be getting up.

Well, here goes another rambling review from yours truly. lol

Actually, I've already read this and all the other major AGU fics to where I'm finishing up on Adjustments, so now I'm playing catch up with the reviews!

Loving all the cameos I'm seeing here. Spider-Man, Deadpool, Doc Oc, Bullseye (Nice DD movie reference, BTW :) ) Morbius... I hope you have a few more cameos in mind for future fics. If you use Wade again in the future, have him break the fourth wall sometimes; that's one of his trademarks in the comics.

About the fight with Dr. Octupus. It looks to me like Vincent has Class 100 strength; if you'e worried about using adamantium too much, titanium might give him trouble.

Good way for Amanda, Vincent, and Rogue to receive or upgrade their powers. One thing, though, Vincent and Amanda should really be called mutates, since they weren't born with an X-gene that gave them powers. Same with Sinster and his original Savage Land crew (except for Sauron). Somehow, though, I don't think the FOH or other mutant haters give a damn about the difference. ;)

I think you should give Kurt a little more of a sense of humor, like in the show and the comics. But I like that he and Amanda finally had a chance to hook up.

I see you introduced Blink and an OC, Shadow, in this story. Domino sounds awfully familiar. I'll have to look her up.

Mark II Sentinels? Good one, man. Either you did your homework or played X-Men Legends. I hope we see more of the FOH in the future.

Anyways, keep up the good work. I see you're already at work with another X-Evo fic; I'll have to check it out after I'm through with the others.

i think the part where one of kitty' muffins set off his spider-sense is one of my favorite parts, it's just so funny

great fic, I enjoyed the action and the OC's and some of the other Marvel characters like Spider-man and Deadpool especially how you introduced the latter.