I can see Gear inventing something like this [explanation] for his gear after a frustrating week or two using less efficient methods.
*thumbs up*

NOT GOOD.

Yeah that pretty much sums it up.

Just finished rereading, still as good as ever. Can't wait till you come out with a sequel.

Update soon

Amethystnight88

Hooray! The plot-bunny hit you with its fluffy tail of inspiration!

I suppose this is the end, is it? You drag us through the aftermath of the island, a new power, some cameos of new characters, trauma, the aftermath of trauma, a quick confession, and done? ...Well done. I've enjoyed this story very much, and am glad I read it. Even if I had to reread it to remember what was going on. Anyway, this is going right into my favorites. . happy writing!

You give me so much hope to continue my own fanfiction! Congratulations on finishing your story with class and well written goodness! I hope to see more from ya, but I completely understand the post-grad goodness from college. XD

Well... that ending was kind of rushed and abrupt. Thanks for finishing it though (even if I had to read it all over because I forgot what it was.)

Yeay you updated I love this story and have read it a couple of times the charaters are so fleshed out and react the way I thought they would.

Out of curiosty is this the end of the story or are you going to continue on or possible write a sequle. Personaly I think you should but that's just me :D!

If you do continue this will you bring back the karata dojo and bring in more sharman stuff cause you said that their are some things that would want richies new powers or

something like that it could be am interesting story. You could also have Peter (I think that was the name) helping Richie and Vergil getting jealous of their relationship. Uhh sorry got a little carried away.

Anyway thanks for the update glad your back keep up the good work!

Star89

Sequal please! You should continue writing even if you deside this story is over, good stories are sometimes hard to come by. I have always liked the idea of richies powers evolving into something more like an empath, telepath, teleconesis and so on.

If may be a result of leaving the story for so long but you did not close the last chapter as well as you could have. First you never revistited the karate idea that led richie to discovering his powers in the first place. I also believe you could have made richies shields more clear to virgil as its not specified if they sat down and talked about the full extent of richies powers what with all the trauma and confusion/misunderstandings going on. You mentioned a little about virgils powers, but didnt specify if they were just increasing or if they changed like richies.

Awesome story and writing. Hope you update/post soon

Amethystnight88

It's sad that this chapter is the end of th story, but I still love it nonetheless.

Aw! This turned out just right. Welcome back!

IS THIS AN UPDATE? OMFG IT IS.

This chapter is like a roller coster! For most of it I was just so excited there was an update the emotions didn't effect me too much, but then I was like 'Oh no!' amd then wow, Hot chocolate sounds really good right now, and then 'Yay Sharon' and then 'Oh no Richie! Bad idea! Bad idea!' and then, YAY! and then, the end? Aw, okay. I can't believe you finished this! So happy.

*Ahem* Yes. And lol, Batman knowing a superhero psychiatrist. He certainly would be the one to know lol.

I have to say that this is one of my favorite stories that I have patiently anticipated reading the conclusion of! It is rather ironic that I had just re-read chapter 11 for the umpteenth time contemplating to myself the countless ways this story would have continued (or completed in this case). Thank you very much for not dying on us and for the wonderful story!

I must say, I always assumed this would be one of those fics that I would get attached to, but would never get to finish. How pleasantly suprised I was to be proved wrong! Awesome story.

A Christmas miracle! Thank you for coming back to us and sharing this wonderful chapter. Merry Christmas!