I loved your book! Yes there were some grammar and spelling flaws BUT the idea and intensity of your writing made this book a hard to put down, fantastic, spellbound novel. I now have a hard time watching Harry Potter because its not the same as the journey I had when I read Armilla. You changed my perception of Snape for the better. Thank you and keep writing!

Great story. Although one thing irked me constantly through reading this story. Thank you is two words not one

This was a delightful and amazing read. I absolutely love the relationships you've built up throughout the story, and it made this such an enjoyable binge read. You're a super skilled writerI was hooked the entire time. Thank you for writing this.

It’s the third time I’m reading this story. I just love it!

Amazing, simply amazing! :D This is fantastic writing.

In canon, as far as I know, there is no password for the Ravenclaw common room, rather a door knocker that asks a riddle. You are only granted access to the common room if you can correctly answer the riddle in a way that is satisfactory to it.

Or, according to Pottermore: access is granted by "a bronze, eagle-shaped door knocker [that] asks the entrant a riddle before permitting entry."

Other than a few. slight mistakes, this fic has been very good so far!

She doesn't have the password? Don't ravenclaws have to guess riddles as passwords?

interesting story so far.

Wow. That's really all I can say.
I'm not sure you'll ever read this (this story is a decade old, whaa?) but I just can't leave this without leaving a review.
This is, without a doubt, one of the best and most original stories I have ever read on this website. It's so refreshing to come across something that isn't a regurgitation of the same old overused plot. Somehow, brilliantly and creatively, you spun a story that was new. You brought in an OC, multiple even, and never once did they seem out of place. They all fit seamlessly into the plot. You stuck with canon in all the major areas, but that was never the focus of the story. You brought in background characters (I actually had to Google if Lisa Turpin was actually canon, heh), gave them a voice, and made them important. You gave a new perspective on Houses other than Gryffindor. Your story was never over the top with too much action, or too much dialogue. You always had a perfect balance between the two, and you were able to flawlessly keep it in the perspective of your OC.
One of my favorite parts would have to be all of the little moments you added. The storyline with Morag was definitely a favorite, with the little fights between her and Sev. And you built a new background for canon characters that actually made sense, not an easy thing to do.
I've never come across a Sister!Snape story, but I've always been a fan of the whole concept of Snape having a daughter. This story was similar to that with Sev and Mill being so far apart in age, but I loved the twist that they were siblings. The visits with Hazel were always a fun part to read. One of my favorite scenes was the cupcake conjuring on Mill's birthday.
Overall, this will forever be part of my favorites and I will definitely come back to it when I need some cheering up. I love the dynamic between Sev and Mill, and I can't wait to read the sequel. I've noticed it isn't finished, which physically and emotionally pains me, but I'll enjoy the chapters you do have done and I'm sure I'll live. :P
Once again, this was a beautiful, creative, brilliant, and flawlessly original story. I loved it. You are a wonderful writer, and I hope your creativity has carried you far in life. Best wishes to you, my dear author, and thank you for writing such a fantastic story!

I was up at ungodly hours of the morning intent on finishing this and I have. I absolutely adored this fic, your OC, her sarcastic nature and the strange little family that is she and Severus :) I think this will definitely be something I may have a reread of in the future :)

My heart can't take the adorableness. I'm not saying it will happen but if tender feelings come to light and they both say those 3 words to each other, I may cry :P I love this so much

Ah it happened! I'm so happy, hugs all around! *Imitates Captain Jack Sparrow*

Oh he's so protective! Severus' sarcasm is rather infectious :P She really is her brother's sister. I'm so proud of her and I don't even know her, I would've snapped long ago but if I was having these lessons, they'd need to give me one in speech too, since my Yorkshire accent is far from ladylike xD

I absolutely love Armilla. Snape too! It's not your usual kind of Brother/Sister relationship but I enjoy what they have between them :) Their father is a cock though, excuse my blunt language :P

Well I can't say I expected that. I knew they were family but I was thinking more along the lines of close cousins xD