Reviews for Excuses
Tankar chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Hey there... .; I'm just halfway through the first chapter and I had to get this out... You said that Hiei said to Kurama that Yusuke and Kuwabara were at Koenma's office... but then you said that they went to go get them! ; Its just really confusing... Hehe But I'll assume for the best that you meant the latter, ne? Great story so far, by the way '.' Is it finished?
Naoko Youko chapter 6 . 7/15/2004
I have a new favorite HieixKurama fic. I loved this and I could _never_ write anything better. I totally loved it! .~
rebekah chapter 7 . 7/11/2004
I love it
brainwashed-by-fanfic chapter 7 . 5/22/2004
Your story is good, so now the only thing you have to do is make more chapters to make it better. Maybe you could add some lemons in it to give it more writing because you are very good at it. Don't let anybody tell you that you are a bad writer because they are jelous of your talent so good luck on your future stories.
jen chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
u should let Kurama live. he is my favorite character and i think it would be fun for him to live. i want to see what happens to Hei and Kurama. Plus, u write great stories and i loved this one. write chapter six soon. good luck!
Jessica chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
Let Kurama live it was so sad seeing Hiei cry add more thanks Jessica
fox gal chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
whos cares oops my bad just get nother chappy up plz
Kay chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
Great story! Please DON'T LET KURAMA DIE!:*(. Update soon please!
Kuramagirl1976 chapter 5 . 4/21/2004
Hi! It's a good story and I really like it..Kurama can't die, he just can't...it has to be a happy ending..please for the love of the Gods..a happy ending!
Everqueen chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
I can't wait to read more of it lol.
Hydra-Star chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Besides the fact that you obviously don't know when to use CAPITAL letters, this is pretty good. But really, not knowing where to put a capital letter? That’s just sad. You put a capital letter at the beginning of a word that comes after any punctuation mark. For instance, while you write “SHUT UP URAMESHI! and you!
DarkangelWings chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Sounds good so far, hope you don't make it too depressing. Well, I guess I don't care if it ends well. Depressingish angsty fic with happy ending good. Visaversa, not so good. I'm rambling. Well, hope you update soon!
Katyfoxdemon2 chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
Great start!
Cassian chapter 1 . 3/24/2004
MORE MORE MORE! I loved Hiei's tea kettle remark...Finish this quickly, or ill let hiei off the chains on my wall to come finish YOU! :D