Reviews for Ino's Birthday Present |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh lawdy the plot was complete and utter crap, but it was funny. I died at Gaara being shocked that he was thaked, Gai hating on Kakashi, Gai bring bushes from the hidden leaf to the sand village lmaoo etc I just wish you incorporated Hinata. |
![]() ![]() wtf is wrong with gai? fuggn pedo sensei much? |
![]() ![]() I honestly think this has a lot of potential but you spend half the chapter giving credits. Also please don't get mad or take this to the heart but this story just doesn't seem like Shikamaru. And not arresting itachi... |
![]() ![]() I love the last two chapters 7 and 8 were really cute and funny.i love shikamaru! Running out the house I his boxers lol! |
![]() ![]() No!shikamaru. It was so damn good! So close so far |
![]() ![]() I love chapter two guy and lee are hilarious! Make more stories love your awesome! |
![]() ![]() omg! u did an amazing job! :) i love your shikaino story and i hope u make more cuz i like reading ypur shikaino story |
![]() ![]() BRILLIANT! I LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() so cool for the whole fic! |
![]() ![]() Awsome |
![]() ![]() i'm clapping right now if you didnt know |
![]() ![]() Shino-Bugs creepy |
![]() ![]() kiba is a weird man |
![]() ![]() okay |
![]() ![]() not bad in fact pretty good |