Reviews for Secret Visits
Guest chapter 4 . 1/19/2014
Omigod this story is AMAZING your very talanted and I agree that we need to take the labels with here!
sableye chapter 4 . 10/26/2011
This story was very good.

It was good that Kim and Edward had a happy ending and stayed together.

Keep up the good work.
madgirlsrock723 chapter 4 . 10/23/2011
Awesome story! There should be a sequel :)
S.M.W chapter 4 . 10/25/2009
I loved it People sould really do more Edward Scissorhands stories
mutantsrocktheworld chapter 4 . 6/4/2009
I spend hours scouring this site for happy Ed/Kim. I hate Ed/OC. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Well written. *clapclapclap*
MusicalMaryann chapter 4 . 3/7/2009
Very nice! I really enjoyed this. I'd love to see you continue it! :)
MusicalMaryann chapter 2 . 3/7/2009
Great chapter!
Helena Applewhite chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
I like it, even though your vocabulary is strange. "necking" is not a word that comes to mind when I think of Edward. Thanks for the mob scare. It was scary.

I wish you'd included some more of how Edward felt, instead of mostly kim. Sometimes Edward's dialogue didn't quite ring true, too wordy for him, I couldn't quite feel it.

hug

~HA~
M. Night Wolfalona chapter 4 . 2/9/2008
For a first shot a writing romance, you sure are good at it. I just wish that the movie had ended like this instead. Hope that you write another one like this in the future.
BlackXRose23 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
That was one of the best Edward Fan fics i have read ! You should really think about making a sequel. Very very nice job !
HELENz chapter 4 . 10/27/2007
Yup... I love happy, romantic endings... Nice fanfic!
alice chapter 4 . 10/4/2007
i really did like your story however daytime tv it was but the whole point of the movie is not to satisfy your quench for romance and a happy ending. it signifies the feeling of everything you touch you destroy and in the end the only way to prevent more destruction is to leave the ones you is a Gothic tragedy and is more complicated than you seem to be interpreting.
FireGirl09 chapter 4 . 7/31/2007
I really enjoyed this story!
RaeLaser1 chapter 4 . 7/1/2007
Very nice!

I just have one question. Why was that mob stopped so easily?
lauren chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
nice!
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