Reviews for Secret Visits |
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![]() ![]() Omigod this story is AMAZING your very talanted and I agree that we need to take the labels with here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was very good. It was good that Kim and Edward had a happy ending and stayed together. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! There should be a sequel :) |
![]() ![]() I loved it People sould really do more Edward Scissorhands stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() I spend hours scouring this site for happy Ed/Kim. I hate Ed/OC. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Well written. *clapclapclap* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! I really enjoyed this. I'd love to see you continue it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, even though your vocabulary is strange. "necking" is not a word that comes to mind when I think of Edward. Thanks for the mob scare. It was scary. I wish you'd included some more of how Edward felt, instead of mostly kim. Sometimes Edward's dialogue didn't quite ring true, too wordy for him, I couldn't quite feel it. hug ~HA~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() For a first shot a writing romance, you sure are good at it. I just wish that the movie had ended like this instead. Hope that you write another one like this in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one of the best Edward Fan fics i have read ! You should really think about making a sequel. Very very nice job ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup... I love happy, romantic endings... Nice fanfic! |
![]() ![]() i really did like your story however daytime tv it was but the whole point of the movie is not to satisfy your quench for romance and a happy ending. it signifies the feeling of everything you touch you destroy and in the end the only way to prevent more destruction is to leave the ones you is a Gothic tragedy and is more complicated than you seem to be interpreting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! I just have one question. Why was that mob stopped so easily? |
![]() ![]() nice! |