Go Joey/Seto!

amazing

Really great fic you have here! Hmmmmmm... Here are some things I absolutely love about this fic.

1. Puzzleshipping

2. Prideshippng

3. Yami got to kiss everyone on the island (I secretly think of him as being kind of a slut... idk why)

4. Seto got high!

5. There were very few spelling and grammar mistakes

6. The second ending rocked my socks off

I think the only thing I didn't really care for was the puppyshipping. I don't hate it or anything and I can see why people support it but I have this strange aversion to it.

Anyway I loved reading this and I hope to read more of your work in the next five minutes because my mouse is only inches away from the link to your author profile page.

Woo! Loved the 1st ending, cos the second pairings are not really my thing :P Well done on ur story :)

Love love love this chapter!

that was nice

Wow! This was an awesome love...square. Very well written and pretty humorous, with drama and some kind of angst. I'm sure you won't mind me adding you to my favorites list...ne?

Realy god story... And I loved both endings! But I wanna buy yaoi! I have no money at the moment... But once summer comes and I get back to work, guess who's goin on line and buyin doujinshi? Anyway, keep up with your terrific fanficcies!

OMG!

Good fanfic so on chappy 6 right now but I'm getting there!I think I liked how you make Yugi think of all of them on the seemed funny and I like how you describe themVery funny,all of it.

CAN'T WAIT!CAN'T WAIT!They sixth chappy sounds really *cough*"interesting" and I hope it is so.

WHEE!

This chappy was really long...it took me all day to finish reading it!Next chappy,I'm sure will get the ball rolling,.

Wow..who knew Kaiba could be so helpful..even though I don't like Seto/Yami fics/pairings, this one's not bad...please have plenty of Yami/Yugi, that pairing is CUTER AND BETTER!

(drools at Yami with NO shirt on)Me happy..very happy..drool...me likie..

Yayayayayayayayayyayaa! The first ending was perfect! Perfect! Perfect! Coming into this story when I read the summary I just naturally thought that was the way it should work out- otherwise, what really changed? If you come in with Yugi liking Jou and Seto liking Yami as the main focus on a story like this- it has to end the other way. But I think I'm babbling.

Seriously, though, I have huge long dissertations on why I don't think Yami/Seto or Jou/Yuugi works, but you don't want to hear all that. ;)

“But Yami is…mine.

I'm probably too late, but I desperately want it to be YuugixYami! For all sorts of reasons. Mainly, because I don't know that it's even possible for Yuugi or Yami to love someone else. Your true love is supposed to be the person that completes you, no? Well Yuugi and Yami are very literally the missing parts of each other's souls, the balance, the thing they need the most. Why go looking for what you already have in perfection? I feel anyone else with them would be doomed to feel like a third wheel, because that's what they would be deep down.

Also, I don't see Yami and Seto ever having feeling for each other. They form an unstable sort of friendship based on grudging respect, but as a person I don't think Seto offers Yami anything Yami doesn't already have. Or vice versa. How can they have a true bond when there's no exchange there? Besides the fact that it ruins an interesting friendship and Seth and Atemu were cousins, having a very different relationship than most fanfic would have it.

Lastly, I don't think Yuugi and Jou could ever take a step up from friendship to romance. They're so cemented in those roles and the way they view each other I don't think it's possible to change that even with character tweaking. It just doesn't seem plausible to me.