Wa! I wrote this great review for this story, then I went to do something else and it disappeared. I may have accidentally posted it, not sure, so if 2 reviews show up, sorry! Let me see if I can re-create what I said:

I love this story! I love the idea of Gordo as a Daddy (hehe!) I especially loved the line where both Gordo and Anthony tell Crystal at the same time that she looks beautiful. That was so cute!

I also love that you had that beta-read. That was why I picked it to read, because I wanted to see if a beta would make a difference-and it does! You have good stories and a nice feel for the characters, I think your biggest issue is technical stuff like misspellings and missed words. So definately beta!

Also, I said something about his name being Lamberg, not Lamburg, another misspell (I'm assuming) which your beta did not pick up probably because he's a guy and doesn't pay as close attention to everything about Adam as we do! But I agree with your statement that knowing him would make life richer! hehe!

i just read your story. it was so sweet! omg i loved it. i cant wait to see more of your stories. please keep writing~!

you are a great author keep writing but is anthony kraft ethans son?

Aw. That was such a sweet story. I liked a lot. Too bad it's only a one-shot, I mean there are so many questions, but sometimes they just have to be that way.

aww that was so cute! good job with this one-shot ;)

I still think this fic is cute. What can I say, I'm a sap.