nice

I loved this! Did you ever write that sequel?

love it!

interesting story, but it feels unfinished.

I love the relationships in this. I'm kind of new to this fandom, and it seems like everyone likes to ship everyone in the story and their dog. So the fact that you've taken other paths and done it well...let's just say, I'm highly impressed. It's also an interesting little story and I would like to see where you take it.

Wow, my love, you write amazingly! I'm loving the whole Ryou/Spirit conversation thing you've got going on too. There's something mysteriously smexy about it! Your Ryou is so adorable.

Must go read more now!

Allecto

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Aw... but I like this story, it has a very original consept and exicution (if I could spell worth a damn). But you decided to end it. *shurges shoulders* meh.

Wow, i really do hope you d a sequel. You do such good yugioh fics.

Great story! Very vivid and fast-paced. I love seeing Bakura and Ryou team up like this. I'm definitely adding this to my favorites. Thanks for writing it!

Yes I like this. You need to update, then.

But what's up with the title? Not that I really care, but...

So, what awaits Malik, Isis, Ryou, and Bakura in the home of the Tomb Keepers? It can't possibly be anything good...

Ooh very intriguing, but why would you end the story here, eh? It's such an evil cliffhanger. lol. I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment, and it's about time you updated, it's been what, a year or something? Not that I'm one to talk, *cough cough* I haven't updated some of my stories more than a year. lol. But yeah, I almost mistakened this story with another one, but I'm just greatful you continued it.

Really great job on the portrayal of the characters and I just adore how you have Ryou and Bakura as partners in crime; feigning innocence is just what Bakura would do, very in character. I praise you on that. Please do continue soon, the plot is as alluring as ever. See ya next time. _~

*round of applause*

I very much enjoyed this story, and a sequel would be more than welcome. *hugs*

Yay! god story! What will happen to ryou next? Please update soon!

I could hardly believe my eyes when I saw this was updated. It's wonderful. So very well done, and I dearly hope that you do write a sequel, as things would change *so* much with this having happened.

The interaction between Bakura and everyone else, especially the Spirit of the Ring, was just perfect to me. Bakura feels so much older than he really is in this, because of everything that's happened to him. Neither he nor Malik are really *children*, even though they're not yet to their teens.

All in all, a very great story.

Nice chapter; Yami Bakura's little inputs were kinda amusing. :p It's complete, huh? Too bad, I'd have liked to see what happened after they (plus the Bakurae) went into their home. Ah, well. Nicely written!