That was so very well written! I loved it! Though i wish i could've seen what happened later, when Mamuro fully wakes up & confronts an equally awake Usagi, i also feel (& assumed you felt this as well) that this end, i. e. THAT particular point in time, was the perfect ending.

Thank you for this. You're an amazing storyteller.

This was so funny and sweet and beautiful. I super enjoy reading stories where Endymion takes over or switches with or influences Mamoru and yours was one of the best I’ve read. Such a good job. I really felt for poor Usagi in all her confusion. I hope the two of them will have a happy ending now.

This was really funny and heart-warming. Thank you!

completely enjoyed this story. thank you for writing it.

Okay, wow. Interesting.

I love it! :)

Really cute story

A wonderful tale. Thank you

I loved this! So original and I was totally feeling Usagi's emotions as she felt them. Great job!

Me gusto, felicidades.

Seriously, this is freaking hilarious! I couldn't keep from laughing out loud while reading and woke my hubby and son last night. I figured it best to wait for morning to finish.

*grins* I love this!

Imagine what would have happened had Endymion been able to talk with Luna!

-Kai

Very nice.

2004. My goodness, time flies. Well, I don't know if you will ever come back to this site but that's no exception for stopping all the reviews, because this story definitely deserves all of it.

At first I was a bit hesitant to read this because unlike Mamoru... Endymion is a complete romantic. And pair that with a hopeless romantic like Usagi? It's just going to be flying hearts off the screen. But I was pleasantly surprised; you handled the situation pretty well, although there was one 'lil point that I was a bit confounded with... Endymion obviously by the end here has realized that this is not exactly his dear Serenity, so why would he still confess his love to Usagi? Yes, I can understand that Usagi technically is...Serenity, or at least a part of her... but she's still her own person. Just as how you had justified that she doesn't love Endymion exactly, but Mamoru. (Although in the end, she just loves everything about the guy.) So that part there I think could have been more clarified... Or at least be more consistently developed.

But besides -that-, everything else was beau-ti-ful! I love, love, LOVE how you handled Endymion's reactions with this 'new' world and how natural he still acts despite of it, such as throwing his 'cape' aside and his princely dialect. It was obvious that you literally placed yourself in his shoes, and as readers, we greatly appreciate your sensitivity to a character's viewpoint. That was incredibly entertaining. But what I loved even more was how you laid out the romance; it wasn't cheesy or nauseating at all! It was very bittersweet actually. When you had superimposed Serenity's presence over Usagi during their goodbye... that was just, perfect. Very nostalgic and finalizes the moment that this really is it.

If this was written in 2004... I can only imagine how you write now 9 years later.