please update.

Hurry with the next one please! I'M BEGGING YOU!

You're BACK! Coolies!

Well, neat-o chapter, if I do say so myself. Just love the Don/Rowan romance thing!

BTW, if they are ontop of a 10 story building, no way can a streetlamp illuminate them. They're at least 100 feet up! Just thought you'd like to know. There can be other forms of illumination, such as the moon, though. Anyway, that was the only plot hole I found.

Love this chapter a lot! More, please!

BTW, how'd that job at that lodge turn out? :0)

Be blessed.

I can see why Rowan wouldn't be interested in Charlie learning to fight even as a form of exercise.
The turtles might need to be patient while she works out her own demons. Of course Leo knows such skills are not just for hurting woman but Rowan must get over her own demons.
A cute Charlie chapter.

Nice chapter... Charlie's cute! The ninja lesson was kinda short though...normally I would think they would go through the kata a couple of times and Leo would give him some tips or somethin... but I donno anything baout being a Ninja so... great chapter though! KUTGWUS
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Ah, cool Charlie chapter! So cute and so realistic...Yeah, kids have all the enthusiasm, don't they?
Other than two misspelled words this is just terrific! Golly, I just love the Rowan series. Who wouldn't, eh?
Yeah, that Rubic's cube is a bear, ain't it? Hmm...never could work that thing.
Anyway, neato chapter and I'm glad you're adding to this wonderful universe of yours!
So long as it's not a Rubics cube, I'm looking for more!
Be blessed.

Hey! Great as always! I just wondernin why Ro is so short tempered now.. is it meant to be that way? KUTGWUS (Keep Up The Great Work Update Soon)
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A most excellent chapter! Yeah! Love yer style, Lady! The way you set up the lair scene with Don waiting on Mike, how Rowan was getting ready, her still nervous behavior towards Raph, the kitchen...just about everything was so well done.
Critique coming - there is only ( and I do mean only ) one area that I found had been missed when you proofread this... It's where Don ventures into the kitchen to see what Rowan is doing..."he caught sight of Rowan bent over the over stirring furiously at something in a bot..." Not sure what 'over the over' is, and I'm sure 'bot' meant 'pot'. That's it, though!
Anyhew, this is great and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Hope you did a bunch of them before posting the first one...I hope?
Okay, need another just like this one!
Wonderful job!
Be blessed!