I know it's been a really long time, but I do hope you update this story. It's so good!

another awesome chapter! don't worry about chapters being too short, or taking too long to write them. quality over quantity, after all. and this story is definitely high quality.
lance and kitty! yay!
i wish jim would wake up, as im anxious to learn more about him. i'm already quite fond of both of your OC's, in fact.
keep up the great work!

That was so good. I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, ehat does Jim look like?

OC's that don't suck? characters actually IN chararcter? action right from the start? one word...whoa. keep it up, i've been sucked in.

Wow, this is great so far! Fascinating OC's, too. I'll be looking forward to your update.