Reviews for The War For The Orphans
HoneyBear84 chapter 21 . 12/13/2019
Love it so far and seriously hope u will start updating it again someday soon
ArthuriaSnape chapter 21 . 5/8/2018
I really love this ff so I hope ull find time to finish it. I'll be waiting for an update. I know real life can be messy, but plz don't forget this story ;-; My heart needs an end Hahaha. I hope u are fine. Loveeee ~~
AbsoluteReader1995 chapter 21 . 10/27/2017
Alright, first let me start off by saying I absolutely loved this story and The Secret Guardian Angel. I read TSGA first and I loved it, but I did want to know how the war was going to end which is why I took a look into The War For The Orphans. At first I didn't know if I wanted to read it cause I wasn't sure if you had even finished it, but then I looked at the update and I thought "It's been 6 years, she's got to be finished with it right?" Ha ha no. This is so incomplete it's not even funny. I really hope that your are planning on finishing this because I don't like to follow stories that have been left incomplete for so long, but I just love this story too much to forget about it. If you are not planning on finishing it could you please let me know? This is an amazing story and I would hate it if I never got to find out how it ends.
Allpau12 chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
Please finish this even if it's only your outline, maybe then someone will adopt it and finish it.
Allpau1 chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
We would really love this to be finished. A couple have committed on archives of our own.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Please finish this story
IceShadow-HP chapter 21 . 5/13/2017
Is there any chance of finishing this? I hope you will finish this...
Guest chapter 21 . 3/20/2017
Finish this please
Slytherin chapter 9 . 2/4/2017
This chapter was very disappointing. If you want to use religion as a reason that Slytherin didn't care for most muggles that's fine but please get the dates and times correct since you put dates on the diary notes (and us pagans do believe in magic).
Also the interaction between Griffindor and Slytherin isn't very believable. I don't care how good a friend you are, keep kissing me when I've told you no and you'll get punched (or hexed since they're wizards). Also your Slytherin is very passive in your story, unwilling to stand up for himself and I don't think that's the kind of man he was.
Sela McGrane chapter 21 . 2/2/2017
Given that it's been six years since you last updated, I guess it's not likely you're going to finish it. That's a sad thing, as this really is a fabulous story. I will follow this in hopes that you prove this old Slytherin wrong, and come back to complete this wonderful take sometime in the future. :)
Guest chapter 21 . 1/29/2017
This story is amazing and I am just now reading it for the first time! Please, I know it has been 7 years but update!
PrincessMau chapter 21 . 10/26/2016
I loooooooove this story so much! Who is the muggle? Is the potion destroyed? I can't wait for more if you're still writing it!
The arithmancer chapter 21 . 2/6/2016
I know it's been years, but please if you can, finish this
MissNikita chapter 21 . 11/16/2015
5 years later but I pray you will finish this story
jessie s chapter 21 . 11/13/2015
I know it hasn't been updated for 5 years, but I find myself re-reading it anyway and still holding onto the hope that we'll get the next chapter by the time I come back to read again.
Perpetual reader,
Jessie S.
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