This chapter was good. I don't understand why you feel you need a beta.

Are you going to update some time? This is a good story. I hope things work out.

You should continue the next chapter should be around the line

of naruto meeting the villiage and then later on konohs is at war

and they call a new villige for help but it turns out that's the fox

demon villiage and naruto mother and dad were from two powerful

demon clans making naruto the heir when of age but is also the

greastest ninja they have at the villiage so when they see him

some are happy others aren't and he falls in love w/ hinata

I love your story

oh pls pls pls update... i think you're talented so keeo it up and update SOON

you have done a fine job on writing how peaple acted & reacted to the situation. I hope it doesn't take as long to get the next chapter up though.

Don't abandon this one...i beg of you!

interesting

PLEASE UPLOAD SOON!

Very interesting start. I can't wait to see Naruto get some proper kitsune training. Also, I doubt the people who truely care about Naruto like Iruka, Hinata, and Jiraiya will stop looking for him and hoping he'll come home. I can't believe Kakashi would act so coldly towards Naruto. He should have figured out Naruto was back in control and he knows Naruto would never knowingly hurt his precious people. As for Sakura, I hope she feels awful for calling Naruto a monster.

good story i feel bad for him force out of the village

um dude thise chapter is the same as the first chapter whats up with that?

Interesting fic so far.

I can beta for you. Also, I like this idea for a story.

Definately intersting. I would hope you would continue this. I'd like to know who this guy is and how he know Naruto. Good story, keep it up.