i love this story it is great please continue cause we need more gipplai stories in this world

Ooh, I really like this one. Gippal has this whole elaborate plan brought out for Baralai, and it doesn’t seem like it’s going all that well. But I like what has happened so far, and the talk with Rikku was really cute in consideration of Gippal’s liking of Baralai. Anyway, I can’t wait for either Gippal’s confession or Baralai’s realization, so please start writing soon! oh yeah, i love the humor, you're really good at it!

i positively adore this story. The way you portrayed Gippal was hilarious and I would love to read more. Specially when Gippal and Barali finally get together. keep up the good work

I love this story- it's one of the best Gappalai stories on , IMO. That 'Gippal's greatest flirting moments' has given me at least an hour of hilarious day-dreaming. Lol! Keep it up, unlike on the HP bit, there isn't an unlimited amout of stories, especialy Gippalai.

0 This is great,y'know!

I smile and laugh while I'm reading...'cause They are TOO cute!

I like 'Gippal talks to himself-scene',he's cute and funny 0 LOL

Gippal and Barry-Warry ; together in cave-scene is a light-sweet lovely one.

I love your Gippalai. I really love them. 0

Waiting for your next chap.

so cool! really hope to read more of this very soon! (btw, loved the way you portrayed them all, especially Rikku!)

This is so great! I'm a big fan of the Gippal/Baralai pairing. You rock! Now I need to brush up an my Al Bhed (again) so I can decipher the chapter titles. P *adds to favorites*

And yes, I really like Rikku teasing Gippal about how cute he and Baralai are together. Because, seriously, they are. . Right on, girl!

I'm not sure I like the italicized thoughts thrown in there. I like it a lot better when you tell us what Gippal is thinking from a third person perspective - it comes off much more effectively and gives the reader a better feeling of the flow.

Great work!

I really liked the extreme description of the sand in this chapter - I liked it a whole lot, in fact. It really accentuates Gippal's mindset, and the "how could something so tiny-" part was fantastic. I really like this fic so far - thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!

aww so cute :D UPDATE :P

If you dont update this i know were you hand out miss yaoi girl in training, This is a great story so please update soon or yaoi girl will get you

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Aww...getting cuter and cuter by the chapter. I love this. Gippal is just TOO funny. Please update as soon as possible!*squeals*

**Tootles**

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It's been a bit since I read a Gippalai, and this really, really makes me miss it! Your story roxxors. Love how you write, and I'm excited about the next chapter.

great chapter ]

haha funny chapter!