Reviews for I Want the Fire Back |
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bkjar chapter 3 . 1/21/2018 Zachariah is a Medi-wizard since he’s a male. :) |
Sissy Boo chapter 3 . 10/24/2016 Why would you take away the most distinctive Black feature of sparkling grey eyes?Severus is the one with black eyes |
Sissy Boo chapter 14 . 8/13/2016 It does the heart good to see Sirius Black get his youth back, to be allowed to live his young adulthood. |
Guest chapter 8 . 4/4/2016 Why have you said football is unpopular in the UK? It's one of national sports? We call it football? We don't have cheerleaders though? |
Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 6 . 1/26/2016 Poor Hermione! I guess I understand Ron's overprotective tendencies toward her now- I just assumed it was an undiscovered love- what a sad scene, I'm glad you didn't go to any details on it; although a trigger warning could probably still have been used. I'm glad Draco killed Lucius, I hope there are some Dramione friendship moments that would be nice. |
Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 4 . 1/26/2016 I'm really enjoying this story, but I do hope you stop the song lyrics in future chapters, it's a great story but the lyrics give it an immature feeling; I just feel like it's taking away instead of adding to the emotions in the story. But if there are more lyrics I'll skip them, I really am liking the story. |
fabi.martinez1981 chapter 1 . 1/4/2016 Really great story, I just love the Sirius/Hermoine constellation! But I got confused when it came to this de-aging spell... It says that Sirius is twice her age when he returns from the veil... but after being twenty again, it says he is still twice her age?! I didn't quite get that... could anyone explain? ;) |
Mycrookshanks1222111 chapter 2 . 11/14/2015 Chapter 2 isn't showing up |
Guest chapter 14 . 9/24/2015 I can be silent no longer! HER NAME IS GINERVA NOT VIRGINIA! |
elrakis chapter 12 . 11/23/2012 The whole chapter was hysterical and when I got to the 'Harry was naked and skank dancing.' I just lost it. Tears streaming down my face! |
StarGazer451 chapter 4 . 8/20/2012 This is really good, and the de-aging spell was a really original way of combating the age difference:) |
Lazyball chapter 20 . 7/28/2012 I really loved the chapter and i think a sequel would be an excellent idea i belive your story is awesome because of the matrurity as well as the childish moments and it would be nice to see your views about how you picture sirius to be as a father as none of us got that from the books good luck for the the rest of the stories you write ! |
Dagger-Seishin chapter 20 . 5/1/2012 opsy... aweosme sotyr tho. the poor girls been throuhg hell and back liek sirius |
ShezzaBoo0233 chapter 21 . 6/27/2011 Loved it :) |
arwen chapter 21 . 1/17/2011 i loooooooooooovvvveeeee the story! and totally can't wait for an epilogue ! i think that hermone's son should cme back into it, but without her breaking down somehow. cause that would be totaly awesome :) |