Great story, but you're a bit of an ass for killing off Krystal.

Wow, that was heavy! seriously attached now... Great stuff

Until I read this chapter I thought this was cool but now I hate it fox mc is a mother fucker

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i luv this story

Just finished reading whole story...
At first i wasn't sure to hate you or not to hate.
You probably understand, why?

I will try to explain.

Look up here - i decided to relax and read a story about my favorite characters.
Picked Romance/Adventure story with T rating, cause i
fed to the teeth with all those bad things irl.
I didnt read any single review till now, because i trusted your description and dont expected it ends up like that!

Romance/Adventure and Tragedy/Supernatural (maybe not all story long, but it ends like that, it crosses all!) is a bit different thinks don't you think so?
I would not read it if I had known true genre!

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I just have a look at your next story, a sequel to this one, which continues this storyline.
This time i wasn't so naive - i checked rewies, and what do i see? YOU NOT EVEN FINISHED IT, last update few years ago!

I wanted to read a complete story, but instead, after i spend a few days reading it, i suddenly notice what besides it has different genre, but its not truly compleate yet, and probably never will be.

You lied to me twice, you lied to all of us, first time about genre, the second time about "Complete" status.

So f u ck you, b as tard!

I wish you all the worst for the future,
Sincere,
Nerin.

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WTF? serious ? Im totaly disappointed. There was so much potential in Falcon and Katt. i t could have been such a good story but the chapter where Fox dies it realy sucks.

This is one of the best starfox stories I have ever read you are a great writer your stories are great even though you managed to kill both of the main characters in the one book

please write MORE! the story is SOOOOOOOOO COOOL!

i like the series. keep up yhe good work.

Again, excellent as ever.

LOL! 4th season of Sonic X? I think it would be better if they brought Satam back. Sonic X was ok... But Satam was a real children's show, heck, it was more like a mature cartoon with an ongoing story line than some childs toon. It got pretty serious...

~The Guy in the Background~

THAT! Was the absolute longest scene of fluff I have ever read, and not even a smidgen of lewd or inappropriate contact. This story contains an innocence about it that is just unreal for a FanFic written by a teen, you are an absolute saint. I must say, more of one than I am, and it takes quite a bit for me to say a swear word beyond "hell".

I might just be venturing into a few of your other stories when I finally wrap up this long one.

~The Guy in the Background~

Wait wait wait. Something don't add up, Fox was about to leave the hospital. He was checked out, scot free, how does somebody just die on the spot?

Something fishy is goin' on... Plus, this is no horror story, so the main protagonist cannot die. I mean, his name is BEFORE Krystal's in the main character list part on the story description..

The story remains interesting for me. I am still really enjoying it and can happily say, I will finish this. I do not think I have ever read a 260K word story, every. Well, there were a series of two 300 page books that might have been longer than this but that is about it. This makes me curious, how long is this story in pages? Like full size sheets of paper printed on word? Probably somewhere over 100 I would think...

~The Guy in the Background~